AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 20/06/06
I never get tired of reading this story! Keep up the good work. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 20/05/06
loved it.. made me cried u are SOO great writing  keep doing it ! |
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wow. totally great, Im gonna add it to my favorites. i love how you showed hermiones background, i ish they had more of that in the book. well anyway i really loved it so... great job! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/03/06
Beautiful. This story was absolutely wonderful beautifully written. The whole idea of writing a scene about Hermione's past was brilliant and emotional. The ending was good, but I think Harry should have done something more sentimental for Hermione( like buying her a copy of the Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe). This would have shown his desperation for forgivness and how much he wanted to make it up to her. Please continue with writing stories like this and the others. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback. Your idea of Harry buying Hermione a copy of that book is brilliant! Too late, though...  Again, thank you for reading my stories! I'll definitely get another story posted up soon, but school's been driving me crazy for the past few months. |
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DanaUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 24/02/06
Well, here I am to review, Andrew.
Overall, great story. Wonderfully written, and of course it has an awesome vocabulary. The only thing is that the H/Hr seems a little...rushed, perhaps? And I'm not saying that just because I don't like the pairing
Besides that though, accurate characters, and a good memory for Hermione. Two thumbs up! |
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GabyUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 03/02/06
I really loved it, it was fantastic. I liked it because it makes Harry realize how important Hermione is and how he isn't the only person who suffers in the world. What I liked the most was the end when they finally find comfort in each other. |
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BrEnUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/01/06
aaaaaaw  you got me crying here!
Hermione as a seven year old was the most heartbreaking thing ever
and then HArry..aaw that was so sweet  awww!!!!!! Im like all squeeeee right now! lol!
you really need to write another story like this...XD
hugs and kisses!
BrEnDa
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YamilethUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/01/06
 you really made me cry i love your story one of the best i´ve read |
Author Feedback: blush blush...
Thank you so much for the review! |
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That was so sweet... I always thought Hermione deserved a whole lot more credit than Harry has given her in the past... hopefully one of these days he'll wake up and see what's always been in front of him... Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of work with us. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/01/06
that was a beautiful story! i love the memory you created for Hermione and made her feel so vulnerable. you need to write another story like this. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/01/06
oh man this was so heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time.you got me crying,good job. |
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HarryluvrSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/01/06
that's so sweet!!!!!!! keep up the great work and write a whole lot more fanfictions soon! |
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ishi_06Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/01/06
wow alot of detail...and it waz very very excitin and now we kno alot bout hermiones past not onli harry's. everyone feels srry 4 harry but nobody eva thinks wat bout the other ppl 2...so this stori shows u wat other ppl suffer 2...this stori opens ppls minds 2 the real world...i like it very much |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/01/06
I usually never leave reviews, shame on me. But this story just captured everything so well, her pain, his pain, understanding, compassion, and i love how you actually used Hermione's past. Everyone tends to forget that characters have a past too, although we are often not told the details of it is up to us to form it based on the evidence that the characters has given so far.
Great work... i'm about to read your other stories ~__^ |
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peacefulSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/01/06
Soo sweet.
The part about Hermione getting bullied really goes with the real story. And how you used the quote.
Really good  |
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