I love this chapter! It's sweet and tender and everything only a ron/luna fic could be.

Good fic, i've just discovered every chapter is a letter of the word 'love', i know it's obvious but i decided to point that i like that fact a lot

aww. . im tearing. that was so beautiful. i've never really read any r/l fics but now i'm going to go read each story of yours. i hope i can find another story as good as yours but i dont think so. you portray luna and ron so well!

Well, I thought that it was really great. I loved the happpy endings. I really liked that they had some troubles and that Ron had gotten sick of her. Nobody can really tell what Luna really is like. I do think that she can be a lot smarter than she looks. It seemed that your character-Luna, was more of the dreamy-childlike Luna. It worked quite well.

That isn't a good chapter. I can see how Ron was getting sick of her childish antics (well...in his view that's how he saw her). Well, it was a great chapter. Poor Luna though, she is quite..smater than you think though.

Well, I can tell you one thing. That was a even cuter than the last chapter. Ron finally had kissed her. I want to see more of the story unfold. I do like this Luna. She seems more dream-like.

Oh. Well I read your other R/LL fics, so I figured I might as well read more. Wow the first all Red Moon writer that I've seen at Portkey. Most Red Moon writers write H/Hr or D/G and whatnot. Great job.

I couldn't agree more, I'm a sucker for happy endings!

I loved this story!!! It's like my favorite story on this whole website!! I'm gonna read your other storys now.

And let's all heave one big romantic sigh, shall we? Another great story. The ending is simple and sweet and I like how you manage to portray the characters (luna especially) without going over the top. I find that your writing flows effortlessly. A great read. Looking forward to more of your work. Good stuff, man.

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow! Great story! And it wasn't a one-shot! I love one-shots, don'T get me wrong, but I also love stories that are a little longer. Not many people write longer R/L stories.
I totally loved this one! Especially the last two chapters! Well I really loved all of them, but the tension in the last two chapters was just great! I mean realizing that you're in love with a person, and then ... Ron said these stupid things and messed it up. Poor Luna!
But in the end he appologized, and stated, matter-of-factly, that he loves her!!! So adorable!

Wonderful written! Well done!


~Ilka

very very sweet, I love Ron and Luna together, they fir so well. thanks

This was a great finish to this story! You've captured Ron and Luna so beautifully. Their progression to this point was just so enjoyable for me to read!

Hope to read more from you in the future!

Poor Luna. Poor Ron.... the internal conflict was bound to crop up somewhere....Though slgihtly more angsty than the last fw chapters, you've accomplished in making it enjoyable to read.

You've done an amazing job with this! The way you progressed Ron's feelings was just so realistic, and the way he finally allowed himself to notice her was just perfect!