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well...is really hard to find good smut to read...you had this great idea and wrote it very well |
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It is a really good one shot, and really well written. It had a real good story line with real good smut. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/06/06
thank you for writing a scene where a girl receives some damn oral pleasure. i mean, the sex on this site is great but the illusion that women are satisfied by just a good fuck is seriously naive. thank you. |
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DeeCohenSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/06
loved it, so cute and so sweet well done perfectly written |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/01/06
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It's very beautiful.
 I love! 
Very 
Sorry for my short comment but i'm french and i can read english but i can't speak english! |
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Wow! What a naughty little smutlet!!! (  goes my dirty little mind  ) Good job! (on both counts) You used some very good descriptive words here that helped to bring out the story, even though there was no plot. (We need to start checking those plot bunnies. I think they're contagious.  ) It's good to let our minds wonder free sometimes after reading other fics and I like to think that with the occasional reading of pure smut such as this it makes 'wander reading' all the more enjoyable. That and it it gives the gutter-side of my brain something to do now and then.  Again good job. |
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I liked the story. I especially liked that there was almost no dialogue, I think stories like that make some of the best ones. Keep Writing! |
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It was a great story but why were there random "Â" later on in the story???
It confused me a little bit, but other then that I really liked the story.
keep it up
-megz- |
Author Feedback: Mmm that is weird, it must have happened when I uploaded it. I've noticed that in a couple of other stories I've read on the site. Must be something when it reads the file or whatever. That's the first time it's happened to me. I'll see what I can do...mmm |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/05
This is dirty, but vy nice...  Could you come up with more of these stories? Maybe more chapters, more exciting things? |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/05
tat was really cool how you didn't use any words great idea i really liked it |
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That was really good. You're a great author. Good job at the no talking part, I couldn't have done that. Anyways great job!!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Yea it was very hard to do no talking, so it took a while to write it. But it served as a welcome distraction from 'Victim of Love', the latest chapter is giving me troubles but I think I've worked it out. Thanks again! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/05
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crookshankUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/05
Well what can I say... its smutty alright, as smutty goes. But it was anice touch to do away with convos and go right into the action. Great idea there, mate. |
Author Feedback: Thanks It was very hard to do the no talking but it worked out. Glad you liked it! |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/05
WoW. That was extremely descriptive! 
Hope they weren't in the middle of the common room when all that happened.
I need to go and cool down.
Nice job. |
Author Feedback:  Wow thanks! Basically they are anywhere you want to imagine. I decided not to name any one place, I guess to add a little something to do, so everyone can imagine it some place different. Thanks again! |
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