No! Charlotte was such a lovely character . My heart was pounding when Harry said the same height and colouring of Mrs Weasley- I thought that Molly had been killed! Brilliant story- you couldn't improve it, it's already perfect!

Fantastic ! Easy to read for the poor Frenchwoman who I am and certainly one of the best stories i\'ve ever read (French or English) !!!!
Lovely job !

I get to be comment #200. Very impressive. I really like your style of writing and all of your clues were laid out meticulously. Excellent job! I will definitely be checking out more of your stories. Take care and please keep writing!

One of the best stories i've ever read. Congratulations, your way of developing the actions and characters was amazing!!!!
I hope you keep writing fanfic stories.

The story itself depended on some serious detail and clue work so I'm not that surprised that just as much thought and consideration went into determining the names. I particularly liked Doyle being just Doyle. He's certainly the kind of character that doesn't more that.

Thanks for sharing.

wow! there's no way the story wz a stretch. i absolutely loved it! i wz simply thrilled 1ce i'd read the whole of it. WAT a fic.! definitely worth a read! i still can't stop gushing. it wz fantastic, n to put in Ron's words - bloody brilliant! i say u shud such mystery fics more often! the only thing is that we wudn't want 2 wait 4 it, so u cud 2 complete it n then post it. but even if i c this 1 that way, i don't think that waiting 4 it wud've been a waste really, nope(!) it wud've been a worth neway. i loved how u portrayed Ron, n 'arry 2, oh n 'mione 2! well, ev'rything. truly, u did a brilliant n a wonderful job with this 1! the efforts were crystal clear! 1ce again, loved it! the suspense wz an absolute success frm my side. so, gud luck if u write more fics, since some writers seem 2 b 4getting that they r writers 'now'.

Thanks for sharing this! I am terribly geeky about names and their meanings, so this was fascinating. Once again - in case you haven't heard it enough - brilliant fic!

Excellent Story! I suppose Persephone always seemed a bit suspicious, but never thought too much on it.. Glad everything worked out and Hermione was cleared..

YAY! lol Was thrilled to see this chapter after being gone for about a month. This was a wonderful end, so a really great story. Love the playfulness there at the end. Great job!

~Cat~

LUNA! Uh oh.. I hope Luna's not the person behind it all.. but perhaps she has a theory, or knows something.. Excellent chapter!

Finally finished it! This is one great story, i like the way your villian can manipulate memories it's really scary just thinking about it. You got Hermione down pat, the scene where Hermione literally covered their dinning room with easels and graph that really funny reminds me of the way she is in the CoS when she planned to use the polyjuice potion. Anyway three cheers for one great story

Well..I do hope that you write another chapter. I really htought that was was really interesting. I STAYed up WAy too late finishing this. Wonderful job. Great and great job. Wow...I wonder how Hermioen will deal with Persophone. I would think she'd get sent to Azkaban for all thsoe murders..of course, it would be sorta understandable if she didn't because she possibly could temper with somebody's memory....

Ok, so I was right. It was Persphone. I guess that makes sense for her to want to avenge everybody. Wow..want a freak. Lovely job.

Well now I'm completely confused. What is going on?! Lol. Did that one kid who died, actually didn't die or something? Lovely job. I cannot wait to read more of this. Wow...

Well..more and more information to read. This is really interesting. I cannot wait to read more of this.I'moff to read more.