hmmmm. this is story has interested me. i cant wiat for the next chapter  i wanna see some HR/H woohhoo |
Author Feedback: The next chapter is when the Harmony bloosms fully! But, because of this, I can't finish it >_<.... And right now, my brain seems to be focused on Dusty Death (my mystery fic) rather than finishing this.... Sad, isn't it?
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Cas121689Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/06/06
its too bad my computer sucks, or you could have seen my positivly AMAZING review. [no, actually, it was really bad. be thankful for the lack of good computer... :-P] i realized after commenting on one of your other stories that i probably hadn't commented on any of the other ones. meaning, no chapter alerts. meaning, i get sad. haha, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. on ANY of the stories. |
Author Feedback: Wow, be thankful my computer sucks as well... I was pretty damn sure I replied to this review when you actually submitted it.... Which was ... June, right?
Luckily a random review came in today and I saw that I DIDN'T thank you for the review! Sorry about that....
I'm still working on the next chapter, sadly enough.... It seems as though my brain doesn't want the ending to come about  . but it will come....
Eventually.....
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when all of WHAT started?! JEEZ! not cool!  how did i know you were gonna do that?! are you going to update this fic? its been roughly 2 months now. update!
melissa
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Author Feedback: I'm ashamed. Absolutely ashamed. I can't get the next chapter written! Two months and I can't get it done, I'm trying my best though. It'll be up eventually, just continue being patient please...?
I'm so sorry its taken this long....
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Ack! What a horrible way to leave all of us readers hanging!
This chapter has definately answered alot of questions that I had from the first chapter. I now know that both Harry and Hermione sort of like the other. Harry merely blaming it on the absence of Ginny, while Hermione saying Harry was a piece of her past. Interesting, though, that Hermione had dreams of Harry...
Keep up the excelent writing, I look forward to the next chapter! |
Author Feedback: Now, it's just what those dreams were about ^_^
I will try to keep up the excellent writing, you people just have to keep reading and submiting amazing reviews.
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THis story is so awsome!!!! PLease updaet as soon as possible and keep up the GREAT work!  |
Author Feedback: Ain't it? I will update a.s.a.p!!!
Now, the GREAT work is going to be the hard part. I mean, the capatalized letters make it THAT much harder to accomplish. XD
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THat's when what started? I know it's a silly question since I"ll find out soon, but, still. Why do you have to leave such a cliffy? |
Author Feedback: ^_^
I'm so evil ^_^
You should change your username, trying to give us bad luck aren't you? 
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Author Feedback: I'm the typo master, I usually get one or two people to read it over, but still ... they're one year younger than me (I'm seventeen) so we're all still kids. Give em' a break will ya? They can't catch everything
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/01/06
It's a good start, but there is one thing that I noticed that kind of bugged me. You used things like, "the boy who lived," or the "muggle born girl" and the "Red haired girl" TOO much. It's fine doing it once, maybe twice, but I think you do it too often. There is nothing wrong with just using their names. It's less confusing. Try and narrow it down as you continue this. |
Author Feedback: You're probably right.... I try to give every character a different name, I hate doing dialogue like this:
"Hi," he said.
"Hi," she said.
"What're you up to?" Harry asked.
"Nothing." Hermione said.
I find adding in a different title makes it alot more interesting, rather than that which - in my opinion - is quite boring. Although the dialogue seems to make it even MORE boring....
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kate dUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/01/06
Hmmm, very intriguing. I am looking forward to the updates! I hope this is soon.  |
Author Feedback: So do I. So do I. Though, life rarely brings what we want right?
Expect the next update to be soon. REAL soon, I promise you.
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WOW! I really like this....LOL COntinue, Continue, Continue!! Keep up the good work.. Wonder if Harry and HErmione actually find something or the staff came up with a plan of the two getting together. Post the next chapter or 2 up soon!! |
Author Feedback: Hmm , I'd prefer if Harry and Hermione find each other by themselves rather than with outside assistance.
But you'll see what happens when I finally update ^_^
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lol It has been so long that I forgot what happend lol
But who is Hermione's boyfriend? Ron isa dating Luna and Harry and Ginny still like eachother. Im lost lol
But excited for more nice cliff hanger! |
Author Feedback: Heh, sorry 'bout the time it took for this update.
Hermione's currently with Ron right now, but he's ... being Ronish and showing himself off to other girls. So, the relationship between Harry and los-Ginny has ended and now Hermione's feeling more ... comfortable with Harry rather than the red haired individual.
Can't wait to finish chapter three, it SHOULD be the last one and it SHOULD be up soon enough. Quicker than the last one at least....
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Sounds interesting so far... I like the use of both POVs to tell the story. There are a couple of grammatical hitches, but I found the ideas compelling. Looking forward to the rest... |
Author Feedback: I'm not the grammar master! Though I too look forward to the rest of this story, since it's just spewing out of my mind so wonderfully ^_^
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GinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/06
Interesting chapter. I look forward to more. I really like being able to see it from two points of view. |
Author Feedback: ^_^ So do I. Mostly, I try to write with only one point of view (though it doesn't always turn out right -_-'')
I found this chapter rather dull, though it's essential. Heck, this story's only going to have about three or so chapters! So ALL of them are essential ^_^
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This was good but I noticed you kept changing the persepctives from third person to first person.
"I raised my eyebrows after a long moment of silence between the two of us. The rest of the Great Hall was blissfully chattering about the summer holidays and what it brought about. “Usually...?” Though my prompting was cut off by the entrance of someone very unexpected. “Ooooh, TONKS!” Hermione shrieked, rising to greet her."
For the next chapter you might want to watch that. It's a very easy mistake to make.
The summary of the title got me really intrigued but the first chapter was kind of slow. I still want to read more to find out however.
Also this is just my opinion but I think you use the boy who lived, and the know it all to much. It's fine to use it once in a while but I would just mainly use Harry/Hermione.
Good start Ill look for more.
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Author Feedback: I'm the master of that, EVERY single fic I've written has multiple mistakes JUST like that. I'm not proud of it, but that's the way I write ^_^
I hate using one title over and over again. He said she said he replied with Hermione answered... I try to give each character a seperate title.
I guess I just overdid it this time ^_^
I'm trying to write slowly too, building everything up to the one point in which EVERYTHING comes crashing down unto poor Harry and Hermione.
Thanks for the observations! I will take them with stride and keep writing despite my badness!
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This was good. Very good. I just can't wait to read more. |
Author Feedback: Why thank you! Like I said before, I'm REALLY liking the way this story is going.
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