LindsayUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/04/06
You need to update this story!! I loved it when I first read it, but now it's been 4 months!!! lol |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/03/06
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 26/03/06
It is well written, but at times it is too maudlin. |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/03/06
Ah, I do hope that you continue this story. It really has promise. Keep up the great work! |
Author Feedback: Aw, thanks! I'll finish it after I'm completely finished with Matt's story. |
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Okay I read this a copel months ago and forgot to review and now that I finally foundit agin I'm woundering wear the rest of the story is? I don't mean to rush you into finishing it, I'm just say the you got me hooked on it amd it's driving my insaing not knowing the rest of the story!!! So if you fing time to finish it, or just another chapter that would be great! You'er a vary talented wrghter and I love th read your fic's. Update soon pleas!  ---Tiger111991 |
Author Feedback: I'll finish it someday, but I want to re-read book 5 so I can get some more descriptive scenes in my mind. Plus, I'm completely overwhelmed in writing my story The Hardest Thing. You should check it out while you wait for the update to this story! |
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Madison <3Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/01/06
Hey! Good story, so far! But, I've noticed you haven't updated this one in a while! Don't forget about it! I love it, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Good job so far.
Madison
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Author Feedback: I haven't forgotten about it, I'm just pausing for a bit. I wrote the last chapter right after I had read the fourth book, so my story plot was fresh in my mind. As soon as I have time, I'm going to re-read the fifth book so I'll have clearer pictures and plots in my head. Plus, I'm being urged to write my other fic, The Hardest Things. I will work on this sometime, but not for a few weeks at least. Thanks for reviewing to show you cared about this! I like it when people seem to have faith in my writing!
Katie |
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LindsayUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/06
Wow, I've completely fallen in love with this story!! It' so sweet, so true...if only this was how the actual books played out (sigh) lol. Keep writing, you really have some talent!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I think this would be great as the real story too, lol!
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awww this is sooooo cute so far, i love it! i am looking forward to the next chapter i absolutely cant wait. this is an amazing story, you are an amazing writer, and this was an amazing chapter.  haha. i'll be waitingg |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! |
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Oh... Now I get it. Hermione was talking to tonks the whole time. I guess I should have re read the last chapter. hehe!!!!!!! |
Author Feedback: lol yeah... |
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Author Feedback: lol Thank you! I loved writing this chapter, and once I got started, I found it hard to stop! Thanks for reviewing!
Katie |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 31/12/05
aww thats so cute. i cant wait for the next chapter!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! |
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This was such a touching story. I hated the H/R parts and was so happy when she turned her head when Ron tried to kiss her.
It was so bittersweet and I felt awful for Harry he loves her so much. And I just kept "awwing" out loud. Its just aww!
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I really like and I must find out what happens!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I had so much fun writing it, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Katie |
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This is great so far! Poor Hermione! She really has gotten herself into a fix! And just WOW Ginny, I don't know what to say about that. Can't wait to read more! |
Author Feedback: Yes, poor Hermione. But next chapter will be the in depth story of her growing relationship with Harry, and pretty much the whole chapter will be fluff x a google.
Thanks for reviewing!
Katie |
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PMidNiteSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 31/12/05
Great chapter. It was nice to see 4th year from Hermione's point of view. She should have said something to Harry earlier though. I can't wait to hear about 5th year in the next chapter. Good job.
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Author Feedback: Thank you! I know she should have said something earlier, but, well, life happens and words we intend to say slip away. Thanks for reviewing!
Katie |
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