I lOVE IT!! how the heck did you come up with this? I'm glad that you were able to update... i never found any mistakes, so you're doing a great job, seeing as english isn't you native language!! anyways, i love it and i was wondering if you have any more stories? i'll try and look....

It was very OOC and normally I don't enjoy reading those type of fanfictions but I enjoyed this nevertheless. It seems very sad and bittersweet that she'll only get to see 'her little imp' for a couple of years at most, before her perfect life is stolen away from her.

Just wondering , but why does it have to b expensive 'muggle cars' why don't you use broomsticks, I think that would b beta, other than that though it's gr8

I think that's gr8 2 go bak after uv finiished writing and doing the prologue, im so gonna do that next time I write anything. luvin it already!

this is a really sweat opening hope the rest of the story is as good

This was a really cute story. I don't usually read Lily/James fanfiction that often, but this one caught my eye. Good job with the language barrier too. I never would've known if you hadn't said anything.

This was a really cute story. I don't usually read Lily/James fanfiction that often, but this one caught my eye. Good job with the language barrier too. I never would've known if you hadn't said anything.

This was a really cute story. I don't usually read Lily/James fanfiction that often, but this one caught my eye. Good job with the language barrier too. I never would've known if you hadn't said anything.

great intro cuahgt my attention rite away.. cant wait to see the rest.

that was so sweet! incredible, amazing just WOW!! I really love it!!
I'm glad that James has noted his feelings in the end.
well done!!

aww that was so cute and adorable... you know what's wierd... I'm in the military too... not the army... I'm in the Navy... canadian navy... yeah anyways... I'll let you go, hope you're having a good time
good luck
and keep it up
-megz-

Oh htis was such a good story and I'm sorry to see it end, but it was a good end. Hope to see you back writing soon!

Wow! Nice way to end it! I really liked it! I can't wait to read more of your stories!

aww cute ending! Great job on this fic and good luck in the army!

I think that I reviewed this on another site, but I'll do it again anyway. I thought this was a cute way it end it, and I loved the story.