Love the story, r u going to to add to it?
love the writing :}

I was referered to this by somebody else. I wasn't expecting a PWP fic, but it was nicely done. There was some semblance of plot, but what makes this stand out is that there is actual romance that is somewhat believable, in spite of the fact that it's obvious the whole purpose was to get Harry and Hermione into bed. Normal for PWP, but this is done better than most.

I loved the humor in the beginning of this fic. I wished it would've extended through the entire fic, but the little you did write was hilarious and made the fic much more engaging.

The sex scene displayed more of your talents in writing. The all-out passion Harry/Hermione show was palpable and engaging. You also deal with the viginity issue again and it is as always was handled well. Is this a theme you are interested in exploring or is it just coincidence that the fics I've been reading have dealt with that?

As a dramaturg with extensive knowledge and interest in dramatic and literary forms I'd like to get your ideas on that.

I'm going to read yet MORE of your work!

Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!

Ha ha ha just once... with your best frind... for... 6 eyers... the handsome guy you see every day... her hormones were really taking over so she sould ever thought that would work out...

This is the fifth or sixth time that I've read this story. This is one of the best nc-17 H\Hr stories I've ever read. I share Hermione's love of Quidditch robes.

This is a really good story and Im writing one myself and was wondering if I could use some of your phrases in my story. If its alright then please email me. Great story

I really liked this one.
Hermione fancying Harry ... and finding out she was in his system as well.
Well written as always.

I have read this before and I loved it then, but I just wanted to make sure it was in my favorites!

This is an excellent one shot.
Hermione just proved that it's always the quiet ones you have to look out for.
I hope you'll make a sequel where Ron finds out about them or possibly where Hermione continues to prove the quote about the quiet ones. You know in the Library, Moaning Myrtle's bathroom, the Great Hall (invisibility cloak and silencing charms), Quidditch stands, History of magic, Dumbledore's office and each and every broom closet in the castle.
Dumbledore can even make a comment to McGonagall about how much they are like L&J

Nice little one shot with just enough smut and drama to make it enjoyable

That was brilliant! I loved it!!! I could COMPLETELY imagine myself doing something like what Hermione did... going up to a really sexy guy best friend and saying "I want to have sex with you" lol... I get like that sometimes lol (though I've never actually done that... i mean, randomly going up to someone and saying "I want to have sex with you" lol)
Anyways... that was great! Very well written! I loved it so much!!!
You're a brilliant writer!
-Michelle

aww .... nice little smutty fic, keep up the good work

Luke

@_@ YES, Greatness, pure greatness, the fluff, the inner hermione, the smut @_@ A GREAT FIC, heh i loved it plain and simple

i love story! i also like the name u chose as ur username, its my birthstone.

This is great, I love it. Silly Hermione to think just once would work. A Harry POV would be nice!