i have a question - i feel like i've read this from another fic? have you embellished on this fic in another fic? under a different title? i feel like deja vu (sorry no accents can't remember how to do them) anyway! is there another fic with this same passage in it somewhere? like the last 12 lines? i feel like i've seen this in another fic - or maybe i'm just crazy. very very interesting fic. i can't say i enjoyed it - more like it intrigued me today. anyway, i like the style of writing you used here. very very enthralling.
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com

this is beautiful-- the darkness of it all really gets me.

Oh my gosh that was so sad even though it was written like just her thought type things it was really good, great job!

Oh my gosh that was so sad even though it was written like just her thought type things it was really good, great job!

sorry i dont get this or is there more cos if there is then carry on i would like to know what happens thanx

Wow that was deep. And depressing. Slightly confusing,I didnt understand about being too late. Too late to save him possibly? Anyway, I love your pieces!

I like the mysteriousness. I'm not quite sure whether I assumed the right sort of context of the story but I liked it anyway. Sad certainly, but very well written

Again, I'm wondering if this is a one-shot. This could be very interesting; there are so many different directions it could go in. I'd love to see you continue it.

i dont really get it but i still think it's really really sad. but i don't get it...o well, i'm still really young