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Another Day In Paradise

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Leah Car
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/06
'Several deaths have happened, and Lily is living as a Muggle on the streets of London. No one will help her. No one cares. Every few weeks she moves streets; people don't want her there. Finally she gets found…but why is he being so nice to her?' nice intro
but james never did hate her. he was always asking her to go out with him. in 7th year she finaly did. it was good. constructive criticism! keep writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Author Feedback: Um, thanks!
I know, it's an AU story and I tend to keep my AUs as far from what actually happened as possible.
I appreciate the criticism, and I thank you for reviewing,

x Cazzy x
 

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fatallygorgeous
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/03/06
Aww. How cute. This story is lovely. I really liked it. Boys teasing girls. Tehhehehe.
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

x Cazzy x
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/06
memory loss or not, lily-capable-of-anything-head-girl-evens could find a way to make a living. and james, there are dark wizards running around and you invite some random girl into your home! then you leave her without any suppervision! she could have been a death eater in disguise waiting to kill you! lots of exclamation points because lots of stupidity.
Author Feedback: Never thought of it like that...
Oh well.
And think about it this way. If you lost your memory, you either do one extreme or the other extreme. This is one, my story Princess Leia has the other.
Cazzy x
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/12/05
that was pretty intresting. alot of the time people make lily out to be some kind of god. it was different in a good way.
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review!

x Cazzy x
 

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NatiFcs28
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/05
.....i don't really get it. i think this might have been better as a full-fledged story.

but WHY did she lose her memory. WHY was she on the streets? didn't anyone look for her? WHY was James there when her parents were killed and why were they killed? What reason did he have for killing them?? (he being voldy)

I think it's a good idea, but I think a one-shot was a bit.... too short for this.

xoxo
Natali
Author Feedback: Oh, not you, too!! Where do you people get off on wanting me to make this longer??
*laughs* That's not a dig. It was meant to be a joke...

She didn't originally lose her memory; she wanted to be away from wizardy things that reminded her of Voldy killing her parents, and she went on the streets coz she kept getting fired from jobs. It changed for some unknown reason.
James fancied Lily since she was eleven and Voldy knew that; that's why he attacked her family and killed her parents (did you notice the way Petunia was conveniently left out of the story for once, haha?). James was stalking Lily (ish) coz of his crush so that's why he was there at the right time and saved her.

I hoep (hoep? hope) that answered your questions (I'd already answered them to myself, haha!).

Thanks anyway, and I'm glad you like the idea!!! I've got another one! *chokes on laughter* Actually, it's not a new idea; I've tried to write it for at least a year now and it's never gone right, so I'm trying now!! Yaaaay!!

ly,

x Cazzy x
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x Goddess of Sore Fingers x
 

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hazeleyedmarauder
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/05
cazzy!!!!!! great story caz i hope you continue,

ps: i miss you guys alot
Author Feedback: Thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed it, Danz!
Oh, we miss you too!! Can't you come visit the site even once? It would mean so much to us...
Say hello to James for me!!
ly,

x Cazzy x
 

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loonymoony8
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/05
I love it! Great job! This is only a one-shot? Too bad it can't continue. I would so love to read more.
Author Feedback: Oh I know...but what would the point of a sequel to that be?? I thought I finished it in an acceptable way...
Thanks so much though!

x Cazzy x
 

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Emzki
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/05
Really great story. i loved it! i love the Anastasia story so this was really great!
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks! I loved the story, too...unfortunately, did you know that Anastasia was actually killed with the rest of them? They found her body. So no Disney story...*wails*

x Cazzy x
 

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