Hey, stop putting yourself down I'm really enjoying this story! Nice writing!

What the heck are you talking about? this is a great story! Is it over? Please write more!

Like I said in the last review I can't wait till the next chapter to read, luckily I'm behind so it will only take a few seconds to get there.... lol

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Hey I love the chapter and I can't wait to read more of it... So I am off to do just that.

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Cute one! The pace was nice and slow. The development of Harry's feelings were well portrayed. The end was humorous.

i read the first chapter. i really pushed my self to finish it, i only got to the first paragraph of the second chapter and i gave up. it moves too slowly and it seems like you really havent read the details in the books. some of the things you've written about arent even right.

really cute idea though, and harrys feelings for hermione are so cute.

Well, it’s not a bad story. I think it’s moving a little slowly, but not bad. I’m having trouble with the … style… it’s written in. If I’m not mistaken, each persons dialogue should be it’s own paragraph. When a new person starts talking, it should start a new paragraph. In this chapter, at one point, four different people speak, and it’s all jumbled in one paragraph, and I wasn’t even sure Ginny was speaking until she’s referred to by Hermione. It’s just a tad confusing.

Now, I usually hate it when people pic on dumb little things, but um… Harry beat Ron in chess? Does that ever happen? LOL.

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Happy new year!

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Cool chapter. Hurry up with the H/Hr kissing and blah though because I'm not waiting 35 years for it!
You get 7/10 thumbs up.

Great chapter! Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon!

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This story was great. I can't wait for the next chapter. you did fantastic work.

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