This story is just so beautiful... I really can't put into words what I want to say... brilliant work.... Awesome fic!!!! I can't believe I didn't take the time to read it before. Sorry if I didn't post any reviews on the previous chapters... Well, I honestly couldn't stop reading since I started with the first chap... wow... you're brilliant writer....  Cheers to you and your brilliant piece.... TOODLES!!! |
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This was a very different story, excellent job! Somehow, Evil!Lavender is kinda appealing. A refreshing change from Evil!Ginny. |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 20/01/06
Perfect! Now that was just right. Not to much, not to little, just right, Goldylocks. I truly enjoyed this story. You did a very good job writing it and I hope to read more from you soon. |
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Wow! I enjoyed the emotion and the feeling in each scene. Ron's understanding was wonderful to read, and the entire chapter was a delight.
Of course, you need an epilogue to offset the miserable future you showed us through Draco... please? |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 20/01/06
Oh this was lovely. *G* I loved the Scrooge referrence. & the way the War ends. Keep up the great work!
Lisa |
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Very nice. Sorry I haven't commented on this one so far...just a lot going on (tho that one thing I told you about is slowly working itself out).
I liked the pacing of this one and you get quite creative in whipping up a very sadistic future for Ron to face.
I'm torn over there being an epilogue. On the one hand, you write good fluff and I love reading it. On the other hand, this one ends off nicely as is. Like I said - torn.
Anyway, keep the one shots and mini-series coming...you're still one of my favorite authors.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 20/01/06
Epilogue! Please! This was so wonderful! I love how you portrayed all the characters. Ron grew up so much in this fic! |
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Nice job, as always. I think it'd be interesting to see that epilogue. ;-) I look forward to reading more of you work in the future. Hopefully I'll get the time to finish my first story in the near future. |
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TaySigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/01/06
 I'm so happy!
For Harry, Hermione, Luna, Ron,....
Ginny,Fred, George, Bill, Scrooge--just everybody.
Loved the ending and...everything else. Really liked this version of A christmas Carol
But who was Tiny Tim?
Great Work
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Sage ValeSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/01/06
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/01/06
A worthy ending to a fine story. and another one that JK unfortunately will never read... And no one and nothing can stand in the way of this, so much is for sure. Also - that epilogue might really be a good idea! |
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JayRSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/01/06
Very powerful message cleverly hidden in the retelling of an old favorite. Nice work! I've loved everything I've read of yours so far. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Now on to Fairy Tale.... |
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Anne USigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/01/06
Nice ending to a good story. I'm a sucker for stories in which Ron has an epiphany, and he shows his true friendship and maturity by not trying to possess Hermione. This is one of the best of those that I've read. The Ron/Luna side ship was nicely done too. |
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JayRSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 19/01/06
HI, Terri!
I'm reading this as promised...I think Lily was an excellent choice for a guide to the past. Excellent work, as usual. I can't wait to see what happens next.... |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/01/06
Hello, Terri!
Well, this was the perfect ending to the story. You did the reveal well. I like this Ron - he's more mature and has grown because of his experience and that is what is going to make the changes happen. You did great with both of my ships in this one too! LOL The Harry/Hermione stuff was perfect and the Ron/Luna stuff was excellent as always. I like it a lot!  Go Terri! You know my feelings on the epilogue... me want!
Love Bugs!
Alexis |
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