Well this was a good chapter. It is too bad that you wont likley finnish this story as it was very interesting. However much I may hope that you continue with the story I cant force you. Maybe you can find someone who will take the story off your hands. Hope that we get one last chapter.

omg! you finally appeared! i have been waiting for ages- maybe months. but still! i am so glad you updated. it would really suck if you abandon the fic because i really really really love it. i thibnk the concpet is great. it is very intresting and different. i would wait no matter what. so please do consider. and i know, naruto can be so addicting. you are not the only one. i love naruto also. but i'd like to see what you come up with in this fic as well. it looks really promising (the whole plot thing). great work!

Well I certanly hope you keep writing this. I really likr it, and I would be very glad to see more of your story!

It's really original and fresh, so please continue with VII!!! Please! Could I be more annoying? Hahahahah!

I hope your muse comes back, because this is one of the very few HP fics keeping my attention.

Speaking of Naruto, I just started watching it on Cartoon Network myself, so if you could tell me how too find your fic I'd really appreciate it.

Keep up the great work and I hope that you find enough interest to at least finish this story.

Excellent story. Update soon! Please!

There is one thing that I would like to be cleared up. If there are four Teams (Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, and Slytherin), and there are three members per Team, that would make twelve people. So Voldemort would have to a part of a Team. The only Team he could fit in is Slytherin, because he mentions Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Gryffindor from a third-person perspective, and that it makes more sense. But when Voldemort says, "Team Slytherin led by Draco the Masochist," in the prologue, it appears that Malfoy is the Slytherin Team Captain. Later on, though, Malfoy is reffered to as Voldemort's "subordinate." Unless Voldemort serves under Malfoy in the Team, but is actually his superior, this would mean that each Team has an enequal number of members. Am I right? Or am I rambling? Or did I come to the wrong conlusion?

Please update & respond!

Excellent story. Update soon! Please!

There is one thing that I would like to be cleared up. If there are four Teams (Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, and Slytherin), and there are three members per Team, that would make twelve people. So Voldemort would have to a part of a Team. The only Team he could fit in is Slytherin, because he mentions Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Gryffindor from a third-person perspective, and that it makes more sense. But when Voldemort says, "Team Slytherin led by Draco the Masochist," in the prologue, it appears that Malfoy is the Slytherin Team Captain. Later on, though, Malfoy is reffered to as Voldemort's "subordinate." Unless Voldemort serves under Malfoy in the Team, but is actually his superior, this would mean that each Team has an enequal number of members. Am I right? Or am I rambling? Or did I come to the wrong conlusion?

Please update & respond!

maybe you should but ginny weasley as part of the thirteen...only make her the only other girl in the thirteen and even make her number thirteen too or something along those lines

scary dude that kaji but it was a unique kind of weird.i can't wait to read what you have next in this.

I love this fic so far. Can't wait 'till you update

Ps. I personally appreciate it when authors like you, make it a point to continue their story even though they have "hectic" schedules. So thank you so much for updating reading your story made my day

All I can say is wow. I feel flattered that it took my comment for you to post again Maybe I should comment more often... *scratches chin* Hahaha! Kidding Anyway, the chapter was good. I can see the conflict slowly developing and the reader is seeing more of the nature of the character of each person involved in this story. Also the reader is getting a more definite picture of how the "XII" operates. *Sighs* There's really something special about you and assasin stories... And the more I read them, the more I wish I'd see a movie of it someday... Who knows?

The same thing happened to me w/ like writeing half the chapter and then losign interest i'm glad you updated now if only i could get to doing it

I definitely would love to read more of this fic. There are so many questions I have! I hope you do get back into writing this story. It's great!

Yipee you updated! I too was thinking of reviewing you again to find out what happened with this story! I absolutely enjoy it! I can't wait to see what happens next. Who is on the Hufflepuff team that they too enjoy killing Muggles? Can't wait till you get to the part with HHR.

i cannot wait until the rest of the story comes! this is so exciting! keep up the good work, cause its as awesome as you are!
-kaylee