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omg that was awesome... I've read some of your other stories and they've all been wonderful too, so it's no surprise that this story is too.
keep it up
-megz- |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! What a very kind review  |
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Wonderful! I love all your storys, like Oh_Honestleigh and Anne U, you are an amazing writer.
And this story it's so beautiful... Harry finally can return the favor to her... and of that way!
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Author Feedback: Well-- thank you so much! That's very sweet of you |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/12/05
That was really good, it reminds me of something, its kind of funny that i have this en name and Anne U on my favorite authors and i never knew you were the same person... o well... great job! |
Author Feedback: Yes, that's me  I've been trying (for RL reasons) to separate this stuff from my more kid-friendly fics (especially now that my daughter, who is 9 and ships H/Hr), is showing an interest in looking at things on Portkey....I haven't actually let her read anything here yet, though she has looked at the galleries a few times. Anyway--thanks for commenting. |
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AlorkinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/12/05
THis was a very sweet 'first-time' story. Harry and Hermione have seen so much, and now, they can finally allow themselves to feel. well done. (I also liked the pic on smutty_claus.) I especially liked the "Did you let the room for the whole nioght?" suggestion. A very well done, to you! Alorkin |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. Poor Harry, so clueless...he feels like he has to ask Hermione whether they'll do it again |
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Very sexy story. I like it better than blinders off obviously. Which you said was not originally written for portkey. This story definitely was. |
Author Feedback: Well, actually, this story wasn't written specifically for Portkey. I wrote it for my livejournal and then posted it here after it got a very good response there. As for Blinders Off, well, I guess some people didn't like that story so much *shrugs* I just write what I like. Thanks for commenting. I hope you'll read some of my stories under my other name. |
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lierianSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/12/05
Gah, I just drooled over the artwork then came back here and drooled somemore over the fic you wrote. It was very hot. I liked how you dealt with their mutual seduction. How sweetly clueless and Harrylike of Harry to think he'd hurt Hermione and needed to rush her off to St Mungo's. I had to smile, just like Hermione did. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I was going for a realistic first time and a Harry who was clueless about a lot of things. I guess maybe it worked  |
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Great fic! Love the Harry and Hermione smut hehe HAHA yea I think they DID seduce each other. But that's a good thing.  |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I thought it was a good thing too. Thank you for reviewing  |
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