loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/07
Sweetness everywhere.  Couldn't have asked for a better "smuff" story.  I love it!  |
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I'm so glad I foudn this awesome story through the recommendation engine!!!
This is really a wonderful piece of smutty yet lovely work. You managed to make a hot story still quite romantic and sweet. Fantastic.
I hope to read more from you soon! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for commenting. I'm sorry I took so long to reply (my fault due to technological impairedness). I've got a new story called WAITING TO HAPPEN; I hope you'll read that too. |
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very sexy. i like this one a lot . it definatly got my tempurature up. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much. Sorry it took me so long to reply. I'm glad you enjoyed the story (Clever About This, Too). I have a new story called WAITING TO HAPPEN; I hope you'll read that too. |
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pcgrimmySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/06
Wow. That was pretty steamy. Well written too! I love your writing, thanks. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I guess my evil plan worked (the steamy part)  |
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herdanharSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/03/06
this is one of the hottest things i've ever read!! loved it even when i don't really read hardly any NC-17 stuff i thought that this was great congratulations!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. NC-17 stories are supposed to be hot... if they're not, they've failed So I'm glad this story worked for you. Thanks again. |
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CainaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/03/06
My goodness...That is just incredible. I rarely read stories from the man's pov, so this was very refreshing. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much!! I find Harry's POV harder to write than Hermione, and it's a great feeling when someone says I've got it right  |
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Wow, intense, quick and uber hot. Clever, indeedy. Great read! |
Author Feedback: Thank you  |
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KitSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/06
I truly believe Hermione would be clever about sex too, just like Harry would be a bit clueless, so this was perfect in character. That drawing is amazing, it's not every day you see a smut drawing that is hot, beautiful but not crude. Awesome story! |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much. That's one of my favorite H/Hr smut drawing ever. It was too gorgeous and sensual NOT to write about. I get a lot of plot bunnies from visuals and this one just screamed WRITE ME I'm glad you enjoyed this. |
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tashaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/06
That was a really good story. Wish there was more! lol. |
Author Feedback: Nope, that's all there is of this one, but I do have a tiny new ficlet on Portkey. Thanks much. |
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Vy ParrUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/06
I might've already reviewed you (I don't keep up! Sorry...I try to review the authors I really like).
But just in case I didn't, I really like your stories. They're maturely written (I switched fanfiction sites recently...I was reading muggle.net but most of their authors are annoying, the mods are just as bad, and it's just not a very well run site). And the grammar is awesome! *is an english major so therefor, loves correct grammar and spelling*
Anyway, thanks for being a good author. It is truly a pleasure to read your work.
Vy |
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you so much  I'm a bit of a Nazi myself about spelling, punctuation and grammar (which makes me a S.P.A.G. Nazi I don't think I've ever read any fics on Mugglenet, probably because it's so biased against H/Hr to begin with. All of my erotic stories are posted here and/or on AdultFanFiction.net. Anyway, thank you so much for the very kind review |
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I WANT A HARRY!!! They just seem so bloody pleasant, and nummy. I don't want The Haryy (he is Hermiones) just a Harry, like a little clone. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I want a Harry too...one as sweet and clueless (and eventually catching on) as this one Thanks. |
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Yep, that picture is HOT all right! I can see why it was such an excellent source of inspiration. This story is pretty hot too. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I hope the story did justice to the drawing. The story kind of popped into my mind when I first saw that |
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wafballSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/12/05
I tend not to like "first time" fics, but I do like what you did with this (: I like the idea of Hermione being "clever about this" and I like that she is confident, cos she's usually painted as being completely insecure. Very very sweet! |
Author Feedback: THANK YOU!! Hermione was hopeful that something would happen between herself and Harry, and it did. So maybe she really was confident about it. I definitely didn't want her to be insecure here. She had to very gently lead Harry in the direction she wanted to go. Thanks again |
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ShazzmanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/05
*Applause*
Very nicely done. Very hot and very much in character...as far as these things go, of course! I can imagine Hermione being a know-it-all about this too, at least in the theory.
Now if only this could happen in canon... |
Author Feedback: Thank you. Well, I don't think JKR will ever write THIS particular scenario But hey, forget the Interview of Doom... I think JKR is driving us all to distraction (as in, trying to pull the wool over our eyes). Well, what do I know? I'm DELUSIONAL  Thanks again. |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/12/05
This story really does reflect the artwork. I was curious to see what inspired this and I took a look. Quite good. Hope you continue to write more stories. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I'm glad you think the story goes with the art. I get a lot of my inspiration for stories from visual images and that image was crying out for a story |
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