Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I almost cried. That was so adorable. Fantastic work!!  Cheers! |
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this is really good. i wish you would write another one for the hell of it. i really like this one. just as much as Reason to Stay.
your good. |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/07
wow, that was soo sweet. A little angsty but sweet nevertheless. But i must know, what's gonna happen to hermione? Is she going to be blind forever? Oh, i hope not.
I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/07/06
except for battle of light i've read all of your stories and i've noticed 3 things A. they all are good B. you r a great author and C. they all sound simlar oh and D. they all made me cry  |
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XavielSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/07/06
You should make a sequel about Hermione being blind or something. Those recovery stories are always good. |
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That was a very nice sequel. I was worried about Hermione along with Harry. Blindness would be hard on her, as much as she loves to read, but I'm glad they live happily ever after. One tiny inconsistancy. When Harry first sees Hermione at St. Mungo's you say They had shaven all her hair off, but later you mention her hair framing her face. |
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That's good to know. Though the story was sort of angsty ( I claim true angst as when one of them dies) I really enjoyed reading it. For them to find love through all that they go through is amazing. I loved how you had an answer to all those questions the non-Harmony supporters constantly ask. How come Hermione is jealous? Blah Blah Blah. You finally gave written proof of our answers. I am never certain how to answer those questions. All my friends are against Harmony, but now I have an answer; Thank you!
Keep up the excelent writing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/06
I'm crying  that was soOoOoOoOo sad. She's blind :_( :_( :_( They cut off all of her hair!  That made me really really really sad! This is definitely one of my all time favorites.
Only one thing: Could you make a fanfic where it starts out R/Hr and H/G? I'm so tired of reading fics that don't go by jkr's relationships. BUT this DOES NOT take away from how much I enjoyed this fic. Definitely on of my all time favorites! Well written ~ |
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SmileyrhiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/01/06
Realised i didn't put my screen name. Yeah I WANT MORE!!!!! and I also wanna know how she copes with her parents deaths?????? MOOOOOOOOOREEEEEE!!!!!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/01/06
I WANT MORE!!!!!!! How do they cope with her blindness, what else is wrong with her? Does fred make a complete recovery????? I wanna know!!! |
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I love your stories. Harry and Hermione Potter sounds great! |
Author Feedback: doesn't it? and they'd have the same initials - isn't that the sweetest?
thanks for reviewing |
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*chuckle* - you have a tedency to make me to that.
Im a bit tired now (well, read my other review  ) so im not going to go into depth with this one. This, as the last, is pretty short and have potential for so much more, so im glad that you changed to a longer chapter-based method as i can see when reading Cancitotallus.
Im just wearing a tiny smile at the moment, that should give you an idea of my opinion of this story  |
Author Feedback: glad to make you chuckle.... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/05
your stories are very well written and fairly original, i'm glad you've decided to start doing fanfiction. the endings to these are so bittersweet, but that's how it is in real life, and it's a bit refreshing to not have a fluffy story where everyone always ends up perfect. keep up the good work |
Author Feedback: I like fluff but not too much fluff! thank you for reading and reviewing, sorry its taken so long to reply... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/05
Beautiful story - I love it!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for making Harry and Hermione end happily that's made my Christmas joy complete!!!!!!!!! Sarah |
Author Feedback: thanks heaps - glad that you enjoyed it so much. have a great Christmas. |
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Glad to know that they live happily ever after, but does she ever get her sight back? I think I'll imagine that she will...
It was really sad and beautiful, both at the same time. I really liked it alot! Great job! |
Author Feedback: thanks. you know, I'm not really sure. I'd like to think that it wouldn't matter, harry would be with her any way. but they definately were happy!
thanks for the review. |
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