that was a very nice and detailed way to alternately end the whole Yule Ball scene. Im very glad that you were actually able to come up with this. Good job!

wow. that was well written, harry's whole speech about being aware. i really felt that. your a wonderful writer.

wow... that was uber sweet!!!.. i am so fat now.. i like the way how harry told hermione that he really is AWARE of her.. imean evry movement and mannersim she makes, he knows.. that's what i called paying attention... i loved it... write some more!!!

I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!!

can't believe i haven't come across this fic before - so lovely and romantic

@_@ Wow....that is just wow, VERY Nicely done, excellent Post GOF Yule Ball dance, truly a great story =P

Hello hello!

It was so adorable! I loved how it went from Harry being kind of unsure about whether he noticed her... or was aware of her... to being so articulate and pinpointing what he was going to say. And man, you get +50 points for putting in the Winky and Dobby tidbit, about how Dobby wanted to learn to dance. That was a great touch.
And I know this is sort of weird... but the part about how Hermione's hand aches from writing so much... that just brought on a really real feeling, because I think most of us know what it feels like. You're so good at adding sensory stuff into your fics... the part at the end about the hot cocoa and mint. It really invites us to think about those feelings and sights and smells because it's all so believable.

Keep on writing Harry Potter! I would love to see you start a longer fic.

Keep in touch!
Sophia

Ohh I loved that story!! That was a beautiful story about what every girl wants a boy to notice about her. I love how it just flowed and it just felt right, none of the characters felt OOC and it just felt natural. Thanks for that wonderful story.

Wow, that was beautiful. Love it. Thank you for this fic.
Leine.

Your stories are beautifully short and sweet - expressive and yet not rambling like many other authors. It is a great piece of work, with the setting in tune and the characters behaving well. Of course, some backstory is always desired on what exactly prompted this - it doesn't seem extremely "canon" as per book - but it's beuatiful nonetheless.

Awe that was just great. Made me feel all gooey and stuff. Looking forward to more.

Im having a blast reading alternative scenes to and after the Yule Ball. Really makes up for a crappy Bk6 as far as the shipping goes. And I trully consider H/HR fanfic writers one fothe most prolific in thoughts and ideas and the mnost interesting , to boot.

If this is what the wise-cracks say is DELUSIONAL then BRING IT ON!!!

Aww! Wow! That was so sweet! I absolutley loved it! Brilliant job!

Hi. I kind of a crush on you and your writing.

kthxbye.

That was very sweet and I think it had a really nice mood to it as well!! Good job!

What a cute story!. Really lovely. Thank you. I loved it and enjoyed it. It almost made me cry in a good way.