An absolutely wonderful story written by an even more wonderful author. It's so sad, but I can see it all because of your incredible detail with descriptions. I really loved it!

ok, i have to ask - they never forget promises - thats in your summary. i want to know if i'll be crying at the end of this because i don't want to at the moment or in the next few days. but what happened to harry? does he have to die in order to save the world? hmmmm, you really can write the angst well. jeez
melissa
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I love this piece! I am always searching for little pieces of angst or sadness to read. I'd addicted to them, this one is really great. Loved it, in all its sadness.

I'm crying right now just reading this. It's so heart-renching, but oh so sweet. Please update soon. You are such a good writer.

Excellent chapter.. Will the fever break.. or will it overcome him... hmm.. nice job, keep it up!

Wow! Great chapter.. I'm going on to read your next one, because this is amazing!

-Kourtz

wow, that is so beautifully written, and so sad. Just one question, im wondering whether this is pre or post voldemort defeat.... im tentatively guessing post... but it would be nice to clarify it.

omg that was beyond sad That wasn't the end was it? ::sigh:: So I guess we'll find out later what he has... so sad. Anyway, please update. I'd definitely like to see what happens

aww i love this story. it has such sweet sadness to it. i think you bring out their feelings very well. i like how you write, and i dont see any mistakes so far but if there are ill let you know

:'(. this is so utterly depressing. its written really well, so dont worry about that at all. it could be the lack of sleep or the nervousness of restarting school tomorrow-- but im almost in tears. keep it up, i honestly can't wait for more. [sorry the thoughts are a bit scattered in this]

Beautifully written and absolutely captivating! I really want to know what's wrong with Harry! *wibble* This angst is driving me insane, but of course, that is why I love teh angst so much. It tugs at the heart (or rips it right out) and brings tears to the eyes. Keep it up! Can't wait for more. I really do love your writing

Was that the end? That was unbearably sad. Tell me Harry didn't just die!

Pam

O don't have him die, is that the end please continue he has to get better it would be absolutely awful if he didn't tthat is so sad!!!

God, you're killing me here with all this angst! I can't stand to see Harry and Hermione so sad and hurting. I can't stop reading this, but it kills me to think there may not be a happy ending. C'mon, Harry deserves good things, give them to him! Please?

I HATE YOU. why do u have to be so fucking depressing, woman? lol