AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/05
oh my goodness. that was so fluffy, but so great!! harry was just so perfect, even in his drunken state. they are just so perfect together and you show that magnificently. good work keep it up. don't be afraid of the pumpkiny, fluffy goodness, it's your friend, and your readers love it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much!  It sure doesn't seem as though anyone's sick of fluffy pumpkin so I'll keep writing it! (And our Harry and Hermione ARE perfect together, aren't they? *sighs*)
Thanks for reviewing and cheers!
Janie  |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/05
I just love plot bunnies! They hop in the most wonderful directions. Great story! I love the idea of Harry just losing it. I love that he was the aggressor. Too yummy!  |
Author Feedback: Hi Mary! Nice to "see" you "here"!  Oooh yeah - sightly aggressive Harry is WAY yummy - watch out for him in URST! 
Thanks for the review (as always!) I'm a bit stonkered by the number of reviews for "URST" (coming in so fast because I'm updating every day I guess) and whlie I really love to reply to all reviewers it just can't happen with URST - but it can here!
So thanks again and ciao for now!
Janie |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/05
Do you know, you are fast becoming my FFF (favourite fluffy ficlet) writer! Another absolutely lovely little piece that catches especially Hermione's personality perfectly. Give us more! |
Author Feedback: Hey there! Honoured to be your favourite FFF writer! I just LOVE writing FF's!! As for more - I may have to take a little break over Christmas (if I can hide from that plot bunny!) but as long as ideas keep popping into my head, I'll keep writing 'em down!
By the way - you DID review "URST" didn't you? I'm sure I sure your "name" over there - but there are so many reviews coming in so fast because I'm updating every day that I just can't keep up with them! Here at "Out of Control" it's NOT so outta control and I'm managing to do what I lilke to do and reply to all reviewers.
OK, have to go do a last check on the next chapter of "URST" so it'll be ready for posting tomorrow morning!
Thanks again for reviewing!
Cheers,
FFF - I mean Janie! |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/05
Thanks for such a wonderful one shot. You could just visualize everything from your great writing. Definitely a day brightner of a story. |
Author Feedback: Thank YOU for reviewing! A few people have said they can visual what I write which makes me feel very good, I can tell you! Thank you again!
Cheers,
Janie |
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Woah. What a NICE plot!!!!
I found myself smiling, smiling and really SMILING from the start and, well, up to now. Hee.  Hope you get more plot bunnies to come! |
Author Feedback: Yes!! *Janie punches air* SMILING is what it was all about! So glad my little story made you do so! Don't worry, I'm sure that plot bunny will be back...he likes the carrots I keep feeding him *giggles*
Cheers and thanks for reviewing!
Janie |
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AidaylaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/05
Aww. That was so totally cute. Harry is so lovably silly! They are just too perfect for each other...  |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I really had fun writing this - Harry and Hermione make me smile and they are so perfect for each other... ::sigh::
Cheers!
Janie |
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HarryluvrSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/05
this was really great! keep up the great work and write a whole lot more fanfictions! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I've written a few already and will be writing plenty more, don't worry! Thank you again - I really appreciate you taking the time to review!
Cheers!
Janie |
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LoupDeNoirUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/05
Awwwe a special "Hello" !!
Really great little story, definently made me smile though out, very in character, just perfect little bits of Hermione's primness and a DRUNK!Harry being an outragous flirt. I could so see this happening, it seemed to capture a night of fun drinking and the start of a relationship so well.
`Harry, listen -'
`Nope! Don't wanna listen. Let's dance.' LOL!
`I am not going to dance with you! You are drunk!'
`Pissed, actually,' said Harry amiably.
Hahaha! very funny very drunk. Very lovely the journey they go through, Harry to admitt to her what he's up to, her to relise what she's feeling, what she could feel for Harry. This so well desribes those utterly magical moments of first kisses and budding relationships. Great job, Janie quite possible your best oneshot, you really do just keep getting better and better. 
To start on the list[ not that I have anytime this moring!] but Cafe-cake: I so thought of you when I read this Goblet reveiw where the reveiwer struggled with her...lus..erh, liking of how young[YOUNG!]Daniel is turning out. Since she decieded that he was too young to be Beef-cake, she named him calf-cake [Hope that translate, you do think of hot men as beef-cake?]
Invasive bunnies; you use to catch and eat Rabbits! wow I'm impressed, Ive never so much as caught a fish! I suppose that is a big differece, bunnies in Down-under, one of the biggest and most famous man-made invasive species problem on the planet[ rumour has it ya'll had to build a little bit of a fence because of them.] Here I use to see wild bunneis on a bike trail right by house and would be happy but think that they must be veiwed so differently there. Well must go and write a quick bit abut another really good story with a relly weird tittle, URBS or UPS or someting like that....
Cheers.
Timours the X-mas elf. |
Author Feedback: I'm LATE!!! Working yesterday and today and having visitors has left me NO time to get back to you - but I will! Tomorrow!! I uploaded Chapter 3 of URST just now and sorta freaked out at how quickly and how many reviews are coming in - I won't be able to reply to them as I usually do  .
Anyways *Janie looks at clock - @#$!* Till soon!
Janie xoxo |
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Oh my, exactly what is needed for the holidays!
I loved Harry's internal monologue throughout, very amsuging, especially with the combination of him being drunk and wanting her so desperately. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I really had a lotta fun writing this little story and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing,
Cheers,
Janie |
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PapertrailUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/05
you know the best part of this fic - no interruptions! |
Author Feedback: No interruptions, eh? To reading, I presume?
Anyways - glad you enjoyed my story enough to review - much appreciated!
Cheers,
Janie |
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crookshankUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/05
Oh! ..;-) Thats it?  Cant have another chapter? Just as I was warming up to the story and it ends...sigh...
Loved it, just loved it! So sweet so innocently refreshingly romantic. 
Just one note though back there, it was kinda disorienting to read one scene( they've just parted..from kissing that is..) and then you have them talking over coffe..sudden shift of perspective, a leap in a rather smooth narration of scenery.
Having said that, its easy to say this is one of the simplest yet refreshingly entertaining fanfic Ive ever read in a while. |
Author Feedback: Oh dear! No more chapters - sorry! Some stories are best left at one chapter don't you think? And you know what - you're right about that sudden transition to the coffee - I actually went back and read it again. That's sometimes a problem when you're writing because YOU as the writer knows precisely what's going on and you sometimes forget to put it all down - gotta watch that! Thanks!
And thanks for reviewing!
Cheers,
Janie |
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H_HrFanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/05
Aww Janie!
That was incredible. The PERFECT little bedtime story! I so enjoy reading your stories! You have such an amazing way with words that every time I read something, I can clearly envision it! This time was no exception. Hermione was, once again, spot on!
Just...WONDERFUL!
Thanks for another amazing one! [gotta love those completed one-shots...espcecially when they're this good!]
Cheers!
Terri
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Author Feedback: Oh, Terri - thank you so much! I'm a little all over the place the last couple of days between work and writing and trying to keep up with emails and reviews which is why I didn't get back to you on this yesterday.
Anyways, I just want to say THANK YOU! It just makes it that much more special getting a review from such a great writer!
Ciao, ciao!
Janie xoxo |
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*squee*
thankies and Merry Christmas that was so cute I like the drunk Harry. It made me laugh!
awsome I enjoyed! |
Author Feedback: Excellent!!!! That's what I llike to hear! ("made me laugh"!)
Merry, merry Christmas to you too!
JanieB |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/05
Absolutely loved it.
Not a lot else I can say. Harry and Hermione just belong together, and this one-shot helps prove my point.
Wonderful. |
Author Feedback: You are soooooooooooooo right Dylan. Harry and Hermione belong together. And that's that!
Thank you!!!!!
Cheers,
Janie |
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GPGASigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/05
OK... First of all, how are you, and where have you been? I thought you had disappeared . I really was getting nervous here. But thanks to God you are back with quite few little plot bunnies bothering you . It seems they won't leave you alone . I think my wish is coming true
Anyways... I had to laugh at your comment about me in your author's note. I agree, I talk as much as you and that is saying something since when you write you write for good. And as you, I love the fact that we can talk so much.
Now about the story... What can I say? "pointless pumpkiny fluff" that I really enjoyed. Harry was being really naughty in this story. But I like when he gets so daring like that. Is quite funny because you wouldn't imagine the "real" Harry like that.
And, have you seen GOF? If yes, what were your thoughts about it? Well, I hope you have seen it since it has been a while. And is time for me to head to your other story!
Thanks for this "pointless pumpkiny fluff" |
Author Feedback: Hi Gaby!
I haven't really been anywhere (darn it!). I've just been flat out and every spare moment at my pc I've been spending writing "Out of Control" and "URST" ... and not writing Chapter 20 of FWAAF...I think I'm in denial, I don't want FWAAF to end...
But now that these damned plot bunnies are out of my system, between doing Christmas cards and a stack of other Christmassy things I'm hoping to finish off Chapter 20 cause I REALLY want it done before Christmas (and then I can start thinking about that Draco/Ginny spinoff, yes? ) so I've got two weeks to finish FWAAF - I'm ignoring any and all plot bunnies before the New Year but I'm sure my overactive brain will be thinking about Ginny and Draco...I need a purple plot bunny come visiting instead of the usual orange ones!
I will ALWAYS love talking (my only obstacle, as ever, is TIME! Why oh why do we have to sleep or eat or work? NUTS!!!!)
Yeah. Naughty Harry. Love him. As for the real Harry....you never know... one can only hope (and since JKR doesn't plan on writing past 7th year, Harry can be ANYTHING us crazy fanfic writers want! )
Now, GOF....I saw it twice on the day it was released (FINALLY!!) across Australia and I loved it. I still think it was a bit "choppy" between events but I LOVE the humour (I would of course!) and everything else. I don't expect the movies to be like the books so I just enjoy them for their own sake. So many yummy Harry/Hermione moments (I thought the Ron/Hermione moments were rather crass and obvious and cliched - the Harry/Hermione moments much more subltle and mature (and Hermione kissed him SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
OK, I've calmed down again now. And I have to do dratted ordinary necessary stuff so I have to go but if I don't get another chance to "talk" before Christmas - have a FABULOUS Christmas with family and friends - I'm so looking forward to seeing all those family and friends I never get time to see during the year!
YOU take care dear Gaby - Happy, happy Christmas!
Janie xoxo |
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