I actually enjoy this story. I think I enjoy the idea of escapism it contains. Less angsty than your other works, sure, but it is beautiful. Harry and Hermione. In the Leaky Cauldron. I wonder why they have to hide their relationship, though? Still, it's just so... sweet/romantic/nice.

And please, never ever write stories where Harry is shagging Ginny. I'll hate you for it, for sure.

Right now, I'm completely in love with your writing style.

Again I am struck by the beauty and clarity of your writing. It is simple but dramatically moving. Another wonderful story.

The ending broke my heart. The poor dears. You weld them like a weapon.

"I’ll still be a hunk."
--Too funny

oh. this one-shot made me incredibly sad at the end--but it was written so acutely. oh, my the feel of it just touched me so much. I just can't get over how sad this makes me! truly, it is a great fic. Thank you.

wow. the end. it was almost haunting. yet so true. and that picture. whew!

"Hmm, I don’t know. I’m sure there are less glamorous muggle career options."

"Yeah, but that’s not going to solve the problem."

"Why not?"

"I’ll still be a hunk."

"Oh you!"

haha i loved it. just the end confused me...are they leaving or is this something they talk about every time they get together?

Hi there, Ama!

Sorry it took sometime for me to find a break to read and review this piece. I’d blame – like everybody else – the holiday season and all its hectic, hassle-bustle, frantic shopping.

First part is hot poetry. You really have a knack for painting such great imagery in your reader’s head. Again, you made Muggle London a far-off place for our lovers, yet they are in there.

Harry and Hermione are such tragic heroes, aren’t they? Anyway, not giving them what they truly wanted makes this piece more potent.

Thank you for this lovely piece.

Nel

Lovely as always, Ama. Your description of their lovemaking stays on the PG-13 side but we know what they're doing (which is difficult for PG-13, IMO). Poor Harry really needs to get away, doesn't he? Sometimes just talking about things can make it easier to bear them; that seems to be the case here. Your writing is always so lyrical, and this is no exception.

That was great. I loved the artwork too. It's fun reading fics when people get ideas from certain things. But they just couldn't bring themselves to leave could they? Kind of sweet despair. Great job.
-Bryana

so they didnt end up moving away thats so sad i really liked tjis story up until the last paragraph

That had a somewhat sad ending but was still so beautiful. I like so much. Perfect way to end school exams.

As always, very nicely done. And also, I'm just as jealous of your talent as ever, well, probably more than ever. I could just see everything you wrote about, and not all of it was from the (gorgeous) drawing you linked to. Can't wait to see your next story!

Where to begin? As usual, your few words are chosen so perfectly, to quaote my favorite line would mean I quaote the whole story! Hauntingly beautiful, acheingly sad, one of the most perfectly reandered and poeticly written love scenes gives way to a story of two souls who may find happiness but never complete peace , because they can not be anything other then what they are heros and servents of the greter good. Wonderful.

Why did they have to be heroes? :sniff:
Oh,Musca, that was a lovely, but sad fic - they're putting their hopes and dreams on hold, and even when they fantasize of a normal life, they :still: stay true to form (helping others)... loved the coupleness of them (her ironing his shirt ...)

oh thank god.

That was really lovely. But Im soo glad that they didnt go through with it.

At first I thought it said they never spoke again. I was sad.

But they need to be hero's it's their destiny.