Hey, you know I think you've done just fine so far with this story. The story flows nicely and I've not really seen any grammatical errors in the chapters. Good job with that!
:thumb up:
Now, about the people complaining about Draco being "too accepting." I say bollocks to them because they must not know much about body language and the correlating emotions. If anything, having a child jump onto your lap, one that is supposedly yours after six years of not knowing, would be shocking. To me, Draco's reaction was two-fold: he was shocked that his gig could be up and he has a child that he didn't know about; all of which was set in motion by Ginny showing up. On top of the fact that he could look at the child and KNOW that she is his, I'm surprised that he didn't fall out into a comatose shock!
And for those other losers that complained, where are their stories? I'd like to read theirs, being the literary geniuses that they are, the idiots.
Anyway, keep going! I think you're doing a great job and I, for one, would like to read more.
Carry on!
