AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 23/01/08
Sorry to say but your writing leaves a heck of a lot to be desired, you miss out far to much, fail to explain things and rush through like a steam train. the plot was ok but the telling was rather poor. JKM |
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gingercatUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 17/07/07
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Author Feedback: Well, uh, I don't think I wasted my time, it was a possible ending that emerged in my head, and when these things emerge, they must be written. Also, I figured that people might get a kick out of seeing it. Since there were people who enjoyed it, it doesn't strike me as a waste of my time.
As for wasting paper...it never was put down on paper. Now if we're talking hard drive space, I'm still going to stick with my previous statement, that since some people enjoyed it, it wasn't a waste of anything. |
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gingercatUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 17/07/07
My problem with this story is that Harry and Hermione could NEVER live in the same town and NOT see each other. They wouldn't stay away from each other for YEARS...they would date other people and feel lonely for each other, but they would NEVER stay away from each other. I am sticking with this story, giving it a chance! |
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Ok and I thought I was weird. Great story but there were something that confused me. Why didn't Harry just apparate in georgia? Other than that good story   |
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grrrrrr......  i know you don't want anyone to be mad at you, but i am.............i wish i could say "i know where you live," but i dont. grrrrr.... |
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grrrrrr...... i know you don't want anyone to be mad at you, but i am.............i wish i could say "i know where you live," but i dont. grrrrr.... |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 13/05/06
*squeals* this was a cute fic!! I loved how you put in the deleted chapters and alternate ending!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 22/02/06
There was really no plot to this story . . .  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 09/02/06
just wanted to say, great story!
this alternate, did not like as much as it was just very sad, but good. |
Author Feedback: Well, I just hadda write the alternate. It just came to me, and I cannot ignore things like that. I have to write them. It simply must be done. hehe. |
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That's good that you never actually thought about ending the story like that.
I have to say, when you said in the summary that it was based on the song Same Old Lang Syne, I didn't want to read the story becuase I thought that you meant the original version. Then, when I was shopping on iTunes, I found the song that you were talking about and my curiosity was peaking. I needed to know how you turned that song into a Harry and Hermione fic. While listening to the song, I tried thinking of something that would fit it, but each time I truely didn't want to think about it. Your story did go along with the song, but definately didn't bring me to tears like the song did.
Thanks for a great story, I hope that you continue to write more in the future! |
Author Feedback: Well, I'm really glad you went and listened to the song. It's a phenomenal song, I think. And it really inspired me. It really mostly inspired the first part more than the second, as I'm sure you could see. I'm glad you liked it, and I will most definitely be writing more in the future. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 20/01/06
That was quite short. Hm...well...that was sad. Not horrible, but it was a different ending. |
Author Feedback: Well, I'm glad you didn't think it was horrible. It was really supposed to be sad, so that's good too. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 20/01/06
I'm excited to see the next little bit posted. Great job at the extra chapter. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I'm really rather fond of it. If I hadn't decided to have Harry propose to Hermione when he got back, I probably would have left it in the story. But I think it works better the way I have it now, and it's kinda nice to be able to put in an extra thing every now and then. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 20/01/06
Well, I see that you decided to keep this AU by having Dumbledore in it. Nice way of ending it. Just to let you know....the children could not choose their Animagus form. It is just given to them.... |
Author Feedback: Yes, well, I like Dumbledore. He's one of my favorites.
And the thing about the Animagus form, I didn't know that when I wrote it. Whoopsies! Well, at any rate, I still would have given the same form. I just would have written that that's what they got. But thanks for telling me. I'll keep that in mind for the future. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 20/01/06
That was cute. I liked it. Nice job. I am glad that Hermione didn't have too much of a reaction like faint or anything. Lovely .  |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I think she's made of sterner stuff than that. I mean, it's a lot to take in, but I don't think she'd faint. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 20/01/06
Well, that is really odd. Sending him in America. Good thing he wasn't dead. That was cool to put those characters in. Great job.  |
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