Please write more this story is good.I'm just getting in to it.  |
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wiked first chaprter when are you going to update i thought that it was brill and it had a real twist |
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VickyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/06
Ha, very cute and funny!!  I liked it alot! You've got Luna down good! I could just picture them all hiding and everything! I liked it alot! |
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wafballSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/12/05
BAHAHA! Omg, this is too funny ^^ The relationships are barely mentioned, but you've got the characters down pat. I always love Luna! And the ending was very well done |
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Ooooo! Busted! If Ginny had just kept her mouth shut. That was pretty funny with Harry and Hermione.  Harry's sneaky. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/05
this is mint is there going to be another chapter, i would really appreciate it. |
Author Feedback: actually i was wondering if i could do a h/hr sequel ánd a d/g sequel as well. as two separate stories of course. i'll see what i can come up with. but i definitely won't be posting anything before 2006. so, see you next year!  |
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gabyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/05
I love it. It's so funny! I can't wait until you continue it. |
Author Feedback: you think i should? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/05
hahahahaha! go neville! if it wasn't for him, harry and hermione wouldn't have shared that moment. this was great! |
Author Feedback: YES!!! neville rocks!  |
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eekk!!
Im liking this one already! I like Ginny because shes making me laugh and I still like how you incorperate Harry and Hermione.
Looking forward for more! |
Author Feedback: thanks! and i like ginny too. she's by far my favourite character! |
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That was certainly pointless and amusing, I loved the complete ridiculousness... |
Author Feedback: it is definitely ridiculous, that's why i like it |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/05
oooo what are they looking for i don't get it completely are you going to continue this or is it a one-shot please do explain that part with the leg was cute though |
Author Feedback: right, when i uploaded this fic, i forgot to mark it as completed. then i thought that i might continue and i didn't change that. i believe it says one-shot in the summary and that's why it is so confusing. sorry! the thing is, i still don't know if i should continue, and if so, should i write another chapter or should it be a separate fic altogether. 
i'm glad you liked it! |
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hpfanna62Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/05
lol.woudnt it be more funny if u include more people in there?i think dumbledore would be a good choice.just a suggestion.
ps:write more of this kind. its really good compare to your other stories |
Author Feedback: eh...this is a closet, not a lorry! but it's a great suggestion.
i'll probably write more of this kind, b/c i enjoy it a lot. i'm not exactly sure what you meant by saying 'its really good compare to your other stories'. do you mean you didn't like my other stories as much? sorry about that! i think it's because they are mostly dramatic. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/12/05
amazing!.i agree with the canon thingy that dude said.snape was in the closet too?how did he go unnotice? man u gotta write more of this stuff. |
Author Feedback: i thought this was quite clear, but obviously it wasn't. the six of them are huddled on the floor of the closet, and they are making so much noise that when snape enters the classroom, he goes straight to the closet to see what's going on. he opens the door, spots them and gives them a detention. the ones in the closet are of course clueless, since they are so busy arguing. i hope that helps! |
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LOL! i can't stop laughing! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! |
Author Feedback: you don't know how glad i am to hear that! thank you! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/12/05
you are a genius! *rolling on the floor* this is so hilarious! the characters are so real, like in canon. every single one of them! terrific job! |
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