Great story!, i was in stitches when reading the part about Ron beginning to imagine Percy's death, that was perfect! .

All in all i think this was a great story, you could have done a little more about Ron and Hermione's eventual breakup, but i guess to follow the line of the story your way was the way to do it, althought that little scare at the end with where's my boy?, was horrific since the story was angst so the reader was inclined to believe that Harry and Hermione were not together.

Good job!.

Great story!, i was in stitches when reading the part about Ron beginning to imagine Percy's death, that was perfect! .

All in all i think this was a great story, you could have done a little more about Ron and Hermione's eventual breakup, but i guess to follow the line of the story your way was the way to do it, althought that little scare at the end with where's my boy?, was horrific since the story was angst so the reader was inclined to believe that Harry and Hermione were not together.

Good job!.

This story is really good. I liked the way you brought humor into the darkness of your story.

I love it! This was a brilliant fic! Where on earth did you get the idea for this? It was just what I needed this evening. I loved the mystery and all with Harry and it was a great, different take on the hero thing, especially him continuing it after Voldy bit it. The only bummer to me was that I would have liked to see it be longer. I would love to have had more of H/Hr in New York catching up before he took off and then more after she found him at Hogwarts. It was so good I wanted more. Well done! Thanks for sharing with us. S

One of the most intriguing ideas I've read in a while. I think it's the atmosphere and mood of the story that does the most for this piece; Harry's situation, the description of the park, the darkness that seems to pervade the first half of the story, they all contribute. The focus in the second half seems to shift away from atmosphere, though, and that slightly detracts from the story. Still, it's very well done.

I enjoyed reading this. It reminds me of "Sixth Sense" with a twist.

Interesting story and well written. The jump to the future was rather sudden though, it took me a couple paragraphs to even figure out what was going on. Other than that though, good job.

That was a very dark fic written very well. The character of Jas was well developed. You didn't mention how Ron and Hermione broke up but thats okay. As long as it is H/Hr it will rock.

oh i like this
the end was very cute!
keep doing whatever the hell you're doing cause it's working out!

That was wickedly awesome. I actually cried when Harry took the bullet for Hermione's father. Great job!

Oh that was good. Was that a mix between HP & The 6th Sense? You gotta love Jas though, he is hilarious! Loved the ending. Keep up the great writing.

Lisa

this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for the next chapter

This story is perfect. Wonderfully created. The story line is perfect, and everything ties together so well. You're a genious. The last sentence was the best. Keep up the excellent work.

-Molly

really liked it. unusual twist on things but thats what made it interesting. good work

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