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JanieB
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 28/01/06
Ahhh, completion!! THAT was a totally brilliant final chapter! I actually read it yesterday afternoon but didn't have time to review then (we were invaded by a horde of my son's friends!). Anyways, that was perfect - and do you know, with this story I didn't need to read the previous chapter each time a new one was posted - I think it may have something to do with the clarity of your writing and/or the impression this story made on me! Thanks, Terri!
Hugs,
Janie
xoxoxo
 

Vickles
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 24/01/06
This was absolutely adorable, and I love that they know they love each other without ever having kissed. Your adult version of Luna is spot-on in my opinion. She's just the same as only, but she's grown and matured and weathered a bit, and I really like that.
Excellent job!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 15/01/06
Well written ~ WhOa! Luna's smart?!? lol
wonderful***

All around them voices grew louder with speculation. “Quiet!” Ron hollered. “If you lot'll shut it, I'll explain.”

This line was especially very, very funny

 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 11/01/06
“Look at these two,” Ron said his voice booming. Harry and Hermione turned to look at each other and in an instant, everything else slipped away. “This is what it looks like,” Ron continued. “This is what it's supposed to be.”

ive just decided im gonna marry ron. he's so deep and truthful and mature in this story...god i need to stop commenting. but that part made me cry too
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/01/06
“Because I can't live without him. He's everything to me, Luna. He always has been. I don't need to kiss him to know that I could lose myself in him. I don't need anything more than what I already have…”

yep...that one made me cry too...your too good at this
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/01/06
Harry shook his head and chuckled, it was a hollow sound that nearly brought Ron to tears. “I don't have to kiss her to know, Ron,” he said firmly. He held his hand over his heart, “it's all right in here.”

that right there brought tears to my eyes. my god i teared up more than i did in the notebook!
 

handhr4eva
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 29/12/05
wow that was sooo good!! i mean really i couldnt go to sleep until i finished it!! and it was 2:30!!!!go u
 

Just Mione
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/05
OH MY GOD!So what happened between harry and ginny (he was cringing when her name was mentioned) IS harry going to stop the wedding or tell molly or some thing
 

Mary6707
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 21/12/05
What a sweet and wonderful ending. I swear I felt Lunas fear. I mean I knew how it would have to turn out, but I still felt her pain. Great writing!
 

ratiocinate
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 20/12/05
Wow, I love how this story is very nearly completely based on dialogue and conversation. Very few authors can pull that off well, and this one of the few fics that I've read where that occurs... I really love how much is revealed within conversations. Thanks for sharing this!
 

Lady Starlight
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/12/05
I love Mature!Ron, very, very nice.
I almost expected a double wedding, it would have worked nicely.

Also, I liked how everyone had varying reactions to the change in plans.
Nice use of Gred and Forge as well.
 

trick of the light
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/12/05
lovely, lovely chapter almost made me cry there. love how you've painted Ron in this one and the H/Hr interaction was just perfect
 

Tay
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/12/05
Mr. Granger

I am so proud of Ron. I knew he would pull through.

I'm just so HAPPY!

My sister's looking at me weird, cause I'm really ill, and now I'm happy! (Those faces just don't match up together )

You did it again!Loved the Story!


(I was so happy when the SOX won. I was in suspense the whole game. GO SOX).
 

lorien829
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 18/12/05
Aw! When the minister asks "Who gives this bride?" and Ron said, "I do!"

That was a great bit.
 

MissLexi
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 18/12/05
Terri - that was beautiful! I have to disagree with one of your reviewers though. I think that Ron does act maturely in this fic. Sometimes you do get railroaded like that - and no matter how hard you try and fight against it, sometimes you can't make your voice heard over the current and you can't swim against everything pushing you the other direction. As for your Luna, I also think you did a great job there as well. Yes, she has probably loved him since she was little, but then again, so have H/HR in this story. As for her supporting Ron's marriage - If you love something set it free?

All in all, I think it works and I think it works well. You did a nice job with this. I still think her mom got off easy, but I like that you added the bit about forgeting later. I love the twins!!! LOL

Great job sweetie!!!

Love Bugs!!!
 

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