sofieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/07
This one too! Wow. Again, brilliant. Where DO you get this stuff? How do you come up with Harry's strange new friends? You do such a great job of bringing these unusual extras to such vibrant life with just a few words!
I don't know why but I just loved this part:
"I got a job at the only operating mill left in town. I didn't need the money, I just loved the feeling of being killed a little each day by the noxious fumes, going gradually deaf. I just wanted to get sickly again, I suppose because I thought if I did, I'd wake up to Hermione once more."
The whole thing was just awesome though. Do more!!! Thanks again.
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I felt the ending to this was somewhat rushed. I liked the heavy description throughout the story - at least at the start, it was heavier there - especially the contrasts between when he left and when he returned. But I'm not sure the simple phone call from Molly should have been enough, well, the scene rather felt incomplete. While I liked the shortness of Harry's decisiveness summed up in the question 'When is it?', it was far too short, as was the ending. |
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LiljazzcatUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/12/05
I really, really love it. I love the way you wrote it and I hope you write more stories soon. |
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i totally loved this story. I love the little journey Harry goes on to get away from his life. I wish there was more but this was very cute  Great job |
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That was really good! It is very different than any other post-Hogwarts, post-war stories that I have read before. I enjoyed it very much! I can not wait to read more of your stories in the future, that is if you post some more of course. Which I really hope you do. Once again, that was a great story.
~Elisabeth~
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/05
good story and marvellous writing. i like the ending very much.  keep it up! |
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LilLambSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/05
oh my gosh, very, very good story! very angsty! and the ending.. ooohhh.. "I don't want to apologize..."  I love how Harry kinda lost himself, and realized he doesn't have to forget to move on.. Great job! I can't wait to read more! |
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Yay! Happy ending! Those are nice. Lol, I don't know what to make your description of Boston and MA, seeing as I live there hehehe. |
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