Very Hot and I liked it. One question though; Why would Hermione who is supposed to be "the smartest witch of her generation" fail to protect herself beforehand from becoming pregnant with what she thinks at the time is a paid escort's child?

All I have to say is "What the-?" that was certianly interesting. now it's got me thinkng...

that was really orignal! and hilarious and cute as hell! loved your kinky hermione hehehe and also gotta love this cute now not that verginal harry thanks to kinky hermione.

Hee! Man-whore. Love potion. Hee! I've been so out of the loop. I'm giggling. Minor comment, if you care for it, the sex was a bit rushed but overall a fun quirky story. Well done. Thanks.

A very cool fic. I loved the playfullness of the Imposter plot element very much and you construct believable and engaging characters. I kept on thinking there was a follow-up chapter and had to stop myself several times from clicking on the navigation drop-down box!

The only real problem that I could see id that the fic is to short. Some more time exploring feelings and giving more details as to Harry and Hermione's intentions and thoughts-- both during and not during the sex scene-- would have enhanced the story and added more of the depth you show such great skill for. It's a great little fic. Congrats!

Very original idea and the smut and emotions were well done too. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it.

Hermione’s kinky… it’s always the brainy ones that you have to keep an eye out for.

I love their kid’s first name, very funny. You can write a sequel to this one where Hermione and Harry explain to Shaun how they came up with his name.

I also love the “`love potion' fiasco in sixth year” bit, if it were only true…

I was in a sour mood today and wanted to read something that would cheer me up. Thanks for sharing, this did the trick. – Bob

P.S. I know I left the same review on the other site. But as an amateur writer, I know how cool reviews are.

Ah! that was cute...and so un-Hermione like, I loved it. Great job! would it really take twelve years for him to tell her why he didn't date her though?

Oh my. That was a great way to find out someone loves you! *EG* & Harry nearly killing the imposter! Absolutely loved it!

Lisa

nice plot bunny. Interesting naming the child after Shaun. Harry's joke was kind of cute though.

OMG I love it... I feel a LITTLE bad for shaun but I think that this was an AMAZING story

keep it up
-megz-

Ha ha! What an original idea - a funny and wonderful little story. And Harry a virgin, Hermione not? Intriguing! Thank you for a great read,
Cheers,
JanieB

I loved it!!!!!! I like the ending! "I basically raped you!" That is so humorous, well at least to me!!!! keep up the good work!

Harry Potter the man whore...this was too funny. I love the part where Shaun took the hairs...to please other client.

This story was quite a unique concept and I liked it. I thought the end was a wee bit rushed and I would have liked to see more--I guess more story--to it. Just my opinion though...