Wow! I loved it, very erotic and very well written! Can't wait to read your other stories

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ok. how am i going to say this... WOW!!!!! ummmm....i DONT HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY!!! if i dont have anything to say, it was awsome!

WOW!! this is totally hot!

Keepit up! I"m going off to read some more of your "naughty" work

Whoa!!! That was really really Hot!!! No really, that was hot!!!

LOL! Hermione can sure be a sly one when she wants to. Of course, Harry's no slouch in the slyness department either. Nicely done, Terri. I always get really excited when I get a notice that you've posted something.

That was a great story. I love your writting style. I cant wait to read more of your work.

Wow! I loved it. You are a great writer, keep up the awesome work.

I have to say that was a fantastic fanfic, I loved the way you expressed feelings just by a few simple actions: you already knew that Hermione was the dominant partner etc.

Couple of buts! (Always some buts).

At the beginning you could speed it up a bit, we don't really need to know what type of top Hermione is wearing and it kind off loosens the tension and anticipation.

And like someone has said before, knead isn't a great word to use. Research a couple of other (simple)words to use.

But otherwise that was just awesome. Well Done. *applauds*

This was so wonderful that I had to go out and buy more batteries!

BRAVO!!

MUY EXCELLENTE!

BELLISIMO!!!

Island Girl

My friend -

I reached for my hand-held, battery operated, 'personal massager' after I read this!

LOVE IT!!!!

Island Girl

Hi Terri!
Just a fabulous read as always! I adore your hot'n'heavy, sexy, loving, funny, playful Harry and Hermione - and your writing is just a joy to read! Whatever that new territory is you're delving into I wish you all the luck in the world with it dear! Take care!
Hugs,
Janie
xoxoxo

That was hott. Good job "practicing" your writing, I enjoyed it. :-) Oh but one word that wasn't all to hott was when you said "kneaded" or that he was kneading her... it was a wierd word for the situation. That's all I have to critique... All in all goooood job! Next chapter could be interesting... hmmm let's see...