omg I love it, it's amazing. you have a really great gift.

keep it up
-megz-

That was freakin awesome! It's crazy how you manage to always write something fantastic. Great job.
-Bryana

this is getting better. keep it up. not many of the sories with a rating like this one are very good. but you have a good start. keep it up.

I love the pairing of their thoughts, how they are losing themselves in each other, how desperate their situation. The back and forth whispered words/near telepathy were wonderful, so evocative.

Wow thats was awesome! You're an awesome writer and I love all of your stuff. Keep up the great work!

well the first part obviosly needed this sequel - both make the picute complete. Again, not so much smut as deep understanding insight into a troubled personality.

Don't take yourself down calling this "just smut" - it's so mch "deeper", to qote your own expression. This "you" perspective is a very clever little twist too!

I really like the almost desperation of this fic. It's really urgent and hot, and I think if you wanted to continue with a plot, it'd be a great starting point. Keep up the excellent work, I'm always so happy to find a chapter alert in my inbox that has your name on it.

Oooh!!!! This was even better than the 1st chapter!!! I always love fics when Harry just thinks about Hermione and how much he loves/needs her. (And I love the way you write Harry.)
Yes, I imagine it would be scary for H/Hr; they are so important to each other. *sighs*

LOVE this SOOOOOOO much. *fangirls you*

Smutty sap-- but good God, so much deeper than that!! (And besides, your smutty sap rocks!) This is soooo hot and so very H/Hr-- I always like the idea that Harry is the one area where Hermione can't be completely rational.
And I still love how Harry can't promise they'll be together forever-- but it doesn't really matter. Because she won't leave him.
Simply beautiful- as always!

*loves* *fangirls*

Wonderful! If I had known there was a second chapter I would have posted my review for this one! So you have two reviews from me!

Oh! It was beautiful! That is so true, u can never know what will happen. I know that to a perfect T! Beautiful! Smut is wonderful!

Oh just bloody gorgeous. Couldn't believe my luck, looking for a completed one shot and when I saw THIS by YOU - ha! Just great. Thank you. How they should be. Stuff HBP. Well, it was good except for the whole H/G and R/H thing.
Great job.
JanieB

Um, again; wow! How do you do it? I am impressed once again. (insert ubiquitous smiley face here) -Bob

oh... wow... that was awesome! I loved how you used just a few words but explained so much emotion. You are the best. (insert ubiquitous smiley face here) -Bob