Very very nice ending! One thing, "loose" is an adjective, "lose" is the verb (like you would pronounce looz). This is such a cute story! *chases down sequel*

Reading "It Was All Just A Dream" recently has prompted me to revisit your other stories. I'm once again reminded of how emotionally forceful and utterly poignant and moving your writing is. I think you are particularly adept at writing exceptional interactions between Harry and Hermione (which, I suppose, is good given the nature of this site). You manage to squeeze an incredible amount of feeling out of, what are sometimes rather brief, interactions all the while maintaining the characters as we know and remeber them. I can't really articulate how much I enjoy reading your stuff and how completely impressed I am with your writing. I've just finished "Reason to Stay" and I'm off to read all your other stuff as I wait for the next chapter to "It Was...Dream". The stories are so truly enjoyable and entertaining that I can't thank you enought for sharing them with us. You have my genuine and heartfelt appreciation.

so cool.. i loved it!!! you are sooo good at this.. write more ok?...and i totally support you and your works!!!

I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!!

This was fabulous, especially for a first fic. I wanted to hug Hermione at the beginning; Harry was being such a prat. Of course, she wasn't blameless, but still... Ron was brilliant to lock them up together because Harry certainly needed this revelation if he is going to defeat Voldemort (which he will, naturally). The end was just too cute.

hah pretty good. Attacking each other with their mouths thats pretty funny guess house elves don't know about kissing.

That was a wonderful story, especially the ending. Dobby is so cute, saying that Harry and Hermione were attacking each other by their mouths. And Remus blushing was adorable. I felt so bad for Hermione in this fic, every time Harry said some thing it broke her heart even more. How could Harry be so clueless? Oh well, at least it had a happy ending. This was an awesome fic, and I love the way you wrote it.

~Elisabeth~

Brilliantly done! The pace of the story was constant throughout and focussed only on H/Hr. That made wonderful reading.

*chuckle*, nice way to end it. I read this while waiting for an update for Cancitotallus (Copy + Paste, no idea what it means or how to spell it ;D).

I think your writing style is very interesting, i haven't really read anything like this before. The only negative thing i can say so far is that i dont quite agree with you about the situations of the characters (like that they would actually end in these situations). That doesnt at all mean that i dont like these stories, im actually quite fond of them, but i'd like to see something "closer" to the original books as well.

I chuckled several times reading the last one and a half page, good way phase out a mostly sad story.

Your stories trigger a massive amount of emotions to me as well which i find very welcome, and this is definitely good stuff for 2 o'clock in the morning readings in a dark room the day before new year

Now on to Reason to Love

Great Story... great ending it left me with a big smile. Keep up the good work!

That was so cute, i absolutely loved it, it made me feel awesome, i coud never do what hermione did even if i did love someone, i doubt i'd be put in Gryffindor i couldn't be brave o well too bad for me i guess Ravenclaw or Slytherin it is... i doubt i coudl be a hufflepuff

Oh wow!!!! That was just so heartfelt and plain wonderful!! I'm so, so glad I recognised your name from my reviewers of URST and came to read this. I read some of the reviews first - I do that, I'm a stickybeak, I admit it! And KirstiR (my darling beta!) AND Fenris have both reviewed! It's nice to "see" familiar "faces"! *Janie beams* BTW, have you read any of their stories? They're like opposites in style, but both brilliant. My favourite fic is actually Fenris' "Just Life" - if you haven't read it, do yourself a favour!
Now I'd better go before I write a novel here - and I have another two fics of yours to read!
Soooooooooo enjoyed this! Thank you!
Janie

Excellent story - the outcome we've all been hoping for. Very well written!

Briliant story!!!
You made my heart stop and beat faster with this (OH so good...) angst. And even made the feeling of this becoming a possibility much strong, giving solid reasons for some acts of cannon characters (Hermione was SO childish in the past book, almost AU).
Congratulations, and PLEASE don't stop the with the drama... you're good at it!
tchau

Aw, that was pretty good. I almost cried once. I'm happy I read it. Thanks for the smile I got at the end.
-Bryana

Awsome. The range of emotions that Harry and Hermione went through is heart wrenching. I like your writing style. Keeps me glued to the screen and all, dunno how to describe it. I guess reading this, I could see and hear everything unfold as if I was watching a movie. Yes, I'm a barking lunatic.

This is actually surprisingly good for a first shot. You should write more stuff. Preferably chaptered.

Now if only this could happen in canon.