Authors don't mind comments on stories that they wrote 2 years ago, do they? Let's hope not, for my sake. This story was pretty amazing. :]

Oh... Lily's a bad girl, isn't she? lol. Blurting out things that intrigue poor lovesick blokes like James. lol
Moon

your family is on crack. seriously. really. seriously. really.your family is on crack. seriously. really. seriously. really. the world of

I liked it, you really know how to make romance convincing. Keep writing.

i apsalutly positivly FUCKIN' love it!

Did i forget to say that im only ten?!

"love letter from the flu?" ROTFL (... there's one about the dentist, too, actually)
that Head business and head business is a deadly pun to be playing with lol
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it's rather creepy how your grandmother would leave you with a line to get your mind out of the gutter (then again, it was the email, wasn't it? lol)

this sucked - even for smut. you need to fill in the blanks so the reader knows where you're going with the story. why were the other mauraders even in this story? its just confusing.

the story would have flowed smoothly if the breaks were left out. They changed the mood of the story and were too cheesy. I actually laughed out loud a couple times. better luck next time

i thought that was a very cute story... ok.. cute not the right word... it was very... HOT?! how's that... anyways... I'm no good with reviewing.

keep it up
-megz-

I thought that was a pretty good fic. Not that it would've happened that way lol, I agree with you on that. But it was good all the same.
-Bryana

Yeah, I got that same email from my friend. Then I sent it to my friends and one of them replied with, "that was weird" or something like that. This was a good one-shot. Update your other fanfics as well, I'm really eager to read a certain one...

haha, i love everything you write, esp. if its L/J, theyre such a cool pair. keep it up.

Ah, mon cherie...
Truly lovely! Can I have that forward, pretty please??
I love the whole thing and she'll prolly get pregnant and ha ha ha, but it's still good! KIU and ly, well done!

x Cazzy x

This was very sweet. Fluffy, yes, but that's just the point of this kind of fic, isn't it?

hey!! lol, i like this! i really like how you got the idea with the flu thing!!! haha thats cute!!! keep up the good work with the rest of your stories!!! (especially a budding romance, lol)