'As he sat up that night, he realized that it was always about her.' i like the intro
'He stared out of the window across the room, watching the night wind whip its way through the trees. They said if you listened closely, you could hear secrets-whispered fortunes that tantalizingly teased you just before they melted away into the darkness.

But all he heard was her name.

He stood up silently, and walked over to the window. He closed his eyes as the wind swirled around him, bringing in a kaleidoscope of visions. They passed through his mind-disjointed, haphazard-with no seeming purpose other than to mock him.

Always her face.

He hated himself for letting her mean that much to him. That wasn't what he had been taught.

Feelings were only for the weak-that was what his father had once said. One had to eliminate anything that could make you lose focus. There was no room for failure. These were guidelines that that held him in good stead for all those years.

All those years before her.' good beginning!
this was good.
keep writing!

god will you write longer fics? seriously just read all 3 ficlters now and in the case of the most recent one i am blown away. they are kinds sad but really well written. your descriptions of ginny are spot on. write some more! asap.

liked your story. the ending was great. haha harry didn't get ginny!

your stories are like a piece of arast work, it's there and great , but horible at the ssame time. i suggest a ong(3 or 4) chapter storty...

lovely. absolutely lovely. it was almost like crystal clear visual imagery...

Val

nice one!!

good play with the words, and i like the ending. keep writing cos your one shot has been one of the best i've seen so far! and its short and concise, intense with feelings.

From a solely H/Hr shipper - that was a beautiful mood "piece" - lovingly written and easy to read (even the angst was "easy to digest" while being thought & feeling provoking). Well done!
JanieB