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.... I'd really hate you right now, if I didn't already know that the story was finished. Lucky me, eh? That's bloody terrible timing on Ron's end. Not that he's to be punished or anything, but that's not going to make things easy of Harry and Hermione's newly discovered relationship, and I'm sensing a lot of anger...
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Poor Harry. : ( I like how long the chapters have progressed to! I wonder how Hermione's visit with Ron is giong. Is Harry going to be angry with her again for not coming to celebrate? He didn't exactly say that they were meant to meet up afterward, though, and she definitely showed up to watch him play. I'm not sure how much right he has to be angry this time, although I can understand being upset I suppose.
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I don't know who this is worse for; Harry for having to deal with being stuck in the friend zone, or Hermione for not knowing to follow her mind or heart. Sticky situation if I ever saw one... You've written it well. : )
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Aww. I hate that Hermione's left like that, but I suppose if I felt like I was angering or upsetting somebody where I was staying, I wouldn't want to stick around either. Especially not if the poor puppy was being blamed for something I did, even though obviously it isn't Hermione's fault. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more. : )
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That was a cute food fight. : ) I enjoyed it a lot. As for the kiss... Finally! I've been waiting for that for fifteen chapters, now! I can't imagine what it was like to actually have to wait for it. ; ) Did Ginny actually show up at the club? I couldn't really tell...
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She and Ron clearly aren't as well matched as she and everyone else seems to believe, otherwise she wouldn't be having so many second thoughts over it, would she? ; ) Nice work. I really love Maggie's character.
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This was a cute chapter. I hope the romance sprouts up sometime soonish. By the way, I really love the idea of a muggle/wizarding combination. I wonder if that'll get any press?
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Cute chapter. Bit sad at first, of course, but I like how you've progressed things with Ginny and Draco. Not too fast, but not maddeningly slow, either. Very well done.
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Harry's adorable when he talks to the puppy. : ) I'm glad Harry and Maggie parted on amiable terms, because that would be much drama for nothing, haha. I like the pictures, too.
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I love Daisy. She's so adorable. I like the business endeavor Hermione's planning to kick off, too. Maggie sounds like fun; I hope she's not going to quit being friends with Hermione just because she and Harry call it quits.
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Aww, Daisy sounds adorable! I'm a sucker for golden retrievers. I love that you've put one in the story. I was expecting a cat; that's usually the animal surprise chosen to present Hermione with. I like the puppy better. Nice choice.
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You've got to love Luna's fabulous ability to be direct in any and all situations. Beating around the bush certainly isn't something she's been known for. I love that you're enhancing that quality, as well.
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I guess people change... a lot. ; ) Ashley's certainly not as innocent as Harry made her sound in the chapters before, but I doubt he'll be needing any more random snogs for long. I think Hermione'll fill that gap quite nicely. : )
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Aww, Luna's lost, too. Ron acted the knight in shining armour part quite well, even if it was slightly out of character for him. Other than that, nice chapter. : ) |
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: ( Poor 'Mione. She just wants everything the way she pictgured it. Obviously there's going to be a new picture involved sooner or later, and I'm looking forward to how that picture develops and moves along. : )
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