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Where These Dreams Go

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sweet10yrold
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/11/06
YOU ARRREEEE AAAAN AH-MAZING AUTHOR! UR STORIES ARE AH-MAZING AND I LUVVVVVV THEM!!! I THINK UR, LIKE, MY FAVVIE AUTHOR ON PORTKEY! MWAH, KEEP UP THE FAN-TAS-TIC WORK!
 

Joey-Jojo Potter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/06
Great Story loved it. By far the best one shot I read in a while. Hopefully thiers a sequel to this. Great work. Loved the whole thing. Its going straight on my favorite list. And once I read all your stories your going on my Favorite Author list.
 

acoustics1220
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/06
wow. i love how you wrote this. i just love it. amazing - the way you separated PoV's and the way you showed harry's pain and hermione's pain and now they're together and there are still tensions and most likely some problems but they know they can't live without each other....amazing. i love this fic. one i will read over and over and over.
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com
...if you could tell me if you have other fics like this or written in this same way could you let me know....this was just an amazing one shot.
thanks!
 

Trini
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/06
I absolutely loved it. I was so moved, this was the first time a story made me cry. It was the just the saddest thing, Hermione's pain was so real I could feel it! You're a talented writer, keep it up!

Funny thing was that i was looking for some smut, but actually thought this story would have been better without the lovescenes (I can't believe I just said that...)
 

GoldenTrioFan
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/12/05
I loved this.I felt so bad that they drifted apart, loved how her parents were supportive.
Exellent work.

~Rach
 

canadianmegz
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/05
... I can only really think of two words that describe how I'm feeling about this story and they are:
Wow and OMG(though that's technically three...) it's amazing. I feel bad because this is not a really good review, doesn't express what I truely feel, it's Amazing, wonderful, mind-boggling how well written it is(I've read some of your other stuff.. I think... anyways I'm not saying it's a surprise that it's YOU, i'm just saying it's amazing that I'm not reading this from a published book.)

keep it up
-megz-
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/12/05
that's beautiful, it just makes me feel like i'm going to cry!! you have an amazing writing technique!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/11/05
Wow. That was INTENSE.

I've never read a story that's taken place so long after Hogwarts before; I never thought I'd like one. But this was too enthralling to pass up. The beginning-- "36 months,2 weeks, and a day had passed, and he is still trying to convince himself that he isn't really counting."-- that line just hit me so hard. It was so sad, yet utterly captivating. It was like watching a car crash; it's depressing and tears at your heart, but you just can't peel your eyes away.

I adored the rushed sentences in the parentheses. There was such raw emotion there, and it really added to the novelty of your story. I could FEEL their pain and longing so thoroughly. I was quite close to tears, which is saying something, seeing as how I never cry. That can only mean one thing: brilliant writing.

I also loved how you made Ron apart of everything. It was so clearly a Harry/Hermione fic, yet you incorporated Ron flawlessly. Too many H/Hr authors leave him out. Well done.

I'm still taken by it, even now. It was so sad, so heartbreaking. It really takes an emotional toll on the reader. That's a good thing, because it means your words hit home. But it ended on a good note, which I felt was important to this particular story. It balanced things out, and allowed the reader to walk away feeling contented.

Thanks for sharing this. I won't soon forget it. I may just have to read some of your other stories now.

,
SecretKeeper
 

Ravenclaw(d69)
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/11/05
OMG that was sooo good! Now all you need is a sequel when they get married. Or you dont have to. I know this story is too precious. Your a faboulus writer! I hope you write more like this!
 

Sabine
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/11/05
"(and everything is right)"

Couldn't have said it better myself. I hate to think of a future in the HP-verse where the trio aren't friends, but, wow, did you ever fix it! Gorgeous story, and I love the way you write.
 

Nox
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/11/05
This fic was a nice one-fic. Very poignant. It comes off as a little sad from Harry and Hermione's perspective with just a sliver of sunshine coming through by the end. I don't know if I'd necesarily call it angst, but it was conveyed very well.
 

harm_whereto
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/11/05
This is the most beautiful, well written fic I've read in a long while. I love your style - the asides written into it - it really adds a great element to the story. Seriously though, I'm wiping tears away - so very moving and beautiful. I'm at a loss for words here...
 

bryana1029
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/11/05
That was a whole lot better than I thought it was going to be at first. But you did a wonderful job with it. I really loved it.
-Bryana
 

cows_go_moo_moo
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/11/05
Wow. Nice story. Loved it, loved the angst, loved the characterizations. One-shots are the best. Can't wait for another one and for you to update your other stories. I really love your writing style.
 

DeliverMeFromEve
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/11/05
Ah, but the angst was marvelous. This is a nice, heartfelt and real love story. This is exactly the kinds of things that happen in an imperfect world.

I'm glad I found this story and thanks for all the pumpkin pie.
 

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