I loved this little story you have written here. Its really cool. Thats the inspiration to my next poem for Lit class....

*%* Susanna *%*

hello i love your story its great its one of the best ive haerd

Ah *gasp*, soooo cute... but you st0le my fic name!!! Even though it's also a song! Which I've never heard of! *looks around uncomfortably*
Anyway! Nice job! A bit confusing without any spaces in the dialogue, but that doesn't matter!

bit late for that
i do think that you aren't too good at songfics
i think htat you should write longer chapters

I think this is a really sweet, short romantic story.
I think when it comes down to it, Hermione would risk her life to save Harry as much aas he would do for her.