I don't even know what to say. Seriously- I have been sitting here for, like, three minutes just STARING at the monitor, in complete AWE over your writing skills.
You know how to spin a story, Twitch. You make me care about every single one of your characters; you write them in ways that stay true to their canon personalities yet you're still able to give them a voice of your own.
You end each chapter without the stereotypical overly dramatic cliffhanger (e.g. And suddenly, there was a BLAST from a wand. Hermione looked up to see that it ~was~...!!! TO BE CONTINUED NEXT CHAPTER) yet are able to keep me completely enthralled all the same, desperate to read as much as you offer (all in one sitting, usually) and despondent when I come to the end of your chapter updates.
Your chapters are worthy to be compared to that of a book's (a compliment I would not give to many authors): every one of them is long, intricate, incredibly well-written and always ~always~ a useful addition, something that moves the plot along. Your story never feels rushed and it never feels lulled. You give me laughs, lust, sex, love, and tears. Yes, even tears. If this were a published book, I would buy it, and I don't buy many books.
Please, please keep writing. I'm not going to whine and urge you to hurry or anything. Just please don't give up on this story, is all I ask. It's too amazing to be left incomplete. And I can't wait to see what comes next.