ahh man...you shoulda had harry get pissed off or something, not to sound gay, but it woulda been pretty 'juicy' if he did something lol |
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Ooh, damn lol...that was a cliffhanger, thank god i could still continue  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 04/11/07
Gawain Greene...Prehaps in reference to the green knight in Arthurian lore?
I do hope he ends up being the Order's undoing. |
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Thank you for this wonderful experience. These fics have been an fantastic substitute for what JKR wrote. You've done a amazing job. |
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Wow.
I read both this and Mysteries of Love over the past week or so, and I really enjoyed them both a lot. I like your take on the way the final battle with Voldemort could have happened, and I was thrilled to find a set of stories where Harry and Hermione's relationship doesn't happen immediately or easy. It flowed well.
Also, excellent Quidditch matches. I could easily imagine what was happening. |
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ooo wow it took me until the 2nd chapter to realize that this is the sequel omgshhh ive been waiting for this forever can not believe its here ahhh!! so xcited!! |
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ooo wow it took me until the 2nd chapter to realize that this is the sequel omgshhh ive been waiting for this forever can not believe its here ahhh!! so xcited!! |
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PhilUnsigned | Chapter : 43 | Date : 08/09/07
Wonderful story you have written. I enjoyed it immensely even though it chocked me up at the end.
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DylanMSigned | Chapter : 43 | Date : 31/08/07
I'm one of those people, that I'm sorry to say, rarely reviews a story. I must say though, that both of the stories in this ship were fantastic reads. They were well written, followed the lexicon regarding the spells, names, etc., and highly entertaining. (read that as they held my interest the entire time). I, for one, am sorry to see you leave the phenomenon that is fanficton. Although, with your writing technique, I have high hopes, that what ever you set your mind too, I will be reading SOMETHING from you in the future. Good luck in anything that you set out to do and know, that you have at least one fan, who sits here and cheers you on.
Sincerely,
DylanM |
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A nice solid tale you've written for us here, I have added it to my favorites.
Thanks for writing,
Mattt |
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Oh come on...what a convenient way to explain that little congruency away.
I can't really imagine Hermione even agreeing to it, even if she had done it under those pretenses...
But, it did at least explain the whole thing away...a scene which had stuck out like a sore thumb in this otherwise tightly woven tale.
Thanks for writing,
Matt |
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Hermione and Harry are way to light on Ron...I mean he forced Hermione to kiss him...and he just tries to apologize it all away...what a piece of shite.
You've made that whole thing way way way to easy on Ron...rather disgusting really.
Thanks for writing,
Matt |
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nobblikeSigned | Chapter : 43 | Date : 18/08/07
sad that this is ur last fic but HAVE FUN  im enjoying every chapter i read |
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ElPotterSigned | Chapter : 43 | Date : 16/08/07
Great story.
I loved both Mysteries of Love and Destiny of One.
Looking forward read any new harmony stories form you in the future. |
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JarnoSigned | Chapter : 36 | Date : 14/08/07
Hmm, I don't think he should have passed as Harry made a major mistake:
" He struggled against whoever was holding him, kicking madly. With his free arm, he grabbed at the hands hold him, prying a finger off of him and pulling it upward. He bent his head and sunk his teeth into it."
Why bite? He should have broken the finger. More pain, faster, easier and it takes the enemy out of the fight.
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