That was certainly interesting, though I think even I, a serious Ginny-Sue hater, can't see her being that pathetic, heh. Good job, anyway.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. Man, i am so happy. So far, a lot of authors i really like have been revivewing my stories!! EEK!  You're one of them.
I can't see her being that pathetic, but it worked out pretty well for the story.
Thank you for your review.
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JGCSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/11/05
Wow, that was an awesome fic!
It was really beautifully written....I almost felt sorry for Ginny...almost...
But sometimes she's just soo stupid!!
Why would you kill youself over that? And then on top of it she tried to make Harry feel guilty?
How selfish can you possibly be?
I'm so glad that Harry didn't feel the "guilt and love"....
Anyway...Write More!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you soooooo much!!!! I almost felt bad for her too. Almost...lol
Yes, she is stupid. She killed herself because she is cuckoo... 
I'm glad he didn't feel the love too...
As far as writing more, do you mean to this story, or in general? Because this was a one-shot... 
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This a very interesting story its very sad. Its very well written. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I'm very proud of this story. I like it. So far, other than the first chapter of my Alias fic, this is the best piece of work i've done.
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HPCfan2Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/11/05
WOW is the first word that popped it to my mind when I read your story that was so sad I suddenly feel bad for Ginny, but it was a great story!! |
Author Feedback: I am so glad that people are responding so well to this story!!!! I kind of felt bad for Ginny, but she was a bit insane in this story.
Thank you soooo much!!!!
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well... ok.... that was a very interesting story. but i loved it! it was very well written and i appulde you.
i ant believe how... err... ginny is. when i first started reading this story i thought it was hermione that committed suicide and i was shocked beyond belief but then i saw it was ginny and i was happy again lol.
anyway nice story. you did a great job!
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Author Feedback: Thank you sooooo much!!! I was very pleased with how this turned out, and it got the creative juices flowing, so now I can write for my other stories.
I was a bit surprised at how insane i made Ginny seem, but anything is possible. Someone who keeps a crush secret for four years is capable of pretty much anything.
Thank you again!!!
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/11/05
Given the fact that it was posted in the H/Hr section, and a honeymoon was taking place, it wasn't too difficult to guess it was Hermione that Harry married, so all the "Mrs Potter" and "his wife" references were a little wasted.
Even in death Ginny had to be nasty didn't she.
I'm glad Harry walked away, although just how much remembering her words will affect him, is probably another story......
Not a bad one-shot, although I'm not keen on stories with character deaths of any kind.
And there wasn't much romance at the start either.
Is just the mention of the word "honeymoon" enough to class it as romance? |
Author Feedback: I figured that. But it could have been him and Ginny, and he had really been in love with Hermione. But thank you for being honest.
Yeah, otherwise the story wouldn't have turned out the way i wanted.
The story isn't meant to be romantic as much as angsty, sort of. The fact that Harry didn't feel love for Ginny proved his love for Hermione. That is all the romance i needed.
Thank you very much for your review. It made me think.
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Well, while I did't like GinnySue in HBP, and I don't think she and Harry are even remotely 'perfect' for each other, I don't want to see her unhappy and/or dead in the end. Even being together with a reformed Ferret would be better than that. Still, very much in character for the Ginny you've depicted to do this, and especially to do it quickly enough that it could tarnish Harry and Hermione's honeymoon. Very sad, indeed.  |
Author Feedback: I don't want her to die either. But, this plot bunny wouldn't go away after reading a fanfic on Friday. I hope she doesn't die.....but it would mean that she doesn't end up w/Harry.
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huh, well i was confused till the very end. I was sure it was Ginny from the beginning but what got me was the bit about her hair being a mess like it always was. Does it say that Ginny's hair was messy? I thought that Hermione's hair was supposed to be the wild one. It was good except I don't think Ginny would be that "delusional" please exuse my use of that word. I think that if Herms had finally admitted her feelings for Harry ( which she has yet to do) then Ginny would believe them but that's just my take on it. |
Author Feedback: Well, the hair thing was a bit of a red herring. A bad one, i'll admit, but a red herring. My mental image of Hermione vs. Ginny is that they both have semi-messy hair.
As far as Ginny being that 'delusional', we never actually knew enough about Ginny to predict the inner workings of her mind. So, it's pretty free range when it comes to her thoughts and feelings. She kept her crush on Harry a secret for four years; that's an indicator of someone who is private.
About Hermione; what exactly are you talking about? If you mean in the story; they are married....if you mean in canon; one can only hope.
Thank you very much for your review. It really made me think.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/11/05
HOORAH, Guilt free Harry, I liked the fact that Ginny had tried to get Harry to feel guilty, but Harry would have none of it. RIGHT ON, still quite depressing but, the fact that she couldn't guilt Harry ROCKED |
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