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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/06
Haha. This is an interesting story so far and I like it. Cant wait for the next chapter
 

heather
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/09/06
great story, you are a talented writer! Especially liked Ron's POV.

I would love to read more of your stories and I would't mind a second chapter for this one.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/06
Really well written. You have a very nice style and a great allusion to the title at the end. Very nice.
 

Glassesfreak206
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/05
Nooo, I check this almost everyday! Please updat!! Please please please!!!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/11/05
That is starting to sound really good. PLz plz plz plz hurry up.
 

jchaser
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/11/05
Oh that was sad...I mean good for H and H but not at the expense of R's feelings. Wonderfully written but you just ached for Ron at the end.
 

keenq
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/11/05
THat is great i really like that its from ron's pov i love it
 

Obvious Secret
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/11/05
You,
are the best.
I love how you wrote it from Ron's point of view.
It makes it seem so, dare I say, Obvious.
Like it's obvious that Harry and Hermione are fucking in the next room, but it's so blantent, that he doesn't see it.

Because it's that simple.

W O N D E R F U L job.
 

pottergirlajg
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/11/05
Wow! That was so really good! It was also well written! Great job! I loved it!

 

barby-chile
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/11/05
Uhhh, I like this, please update soon... I want to know what happens for not to be so obvious (and if Harry is implied much better)
 

Anne U
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/11/05
Mmmm.... one of those "affairs-waiting-to-happen" fics. Nicely done from Ron's POV, and very economically written too. You got a lot of ideas across with very few words.
 

DJ32
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/11/05
Good opening hope to see more soon thank you for the work.
 

alayneni
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/11/05
Oh nice story. Haven't read one of these from Ron's point of view. Almost makes me like him!
 

ron89
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/11/05
keep it coming, PLEASE... this is by far one of the best fanfics ive read and its only the 1st chapter.
 

Angela Dragoo
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/11/05
Next chapter we need a sex scene with Harry and Hermione.

Im such a perve!

good job I like it ill be looking for some more.
 

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