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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please dont say thats it. u hav to update!! reactions??
 

Schokki
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
Wow, that story makes me really want to look for an old castle, best if that castle is also a school (boarding school *gggg* *wink*) and test the walls there! looooooool!

A wonderful story! Very interesting...
 

CryHope
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
Heya...

I enjoyed this. You know sometimes I wish I could go to a school where the building is an old castle because then there's tons of nooks and cranies and "broomclosets" for snogs. Lolz. Is there more? I want more. I think Harry and Hermione want more kisses against the stone wall.

bo-
 

HermioneRae
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
Seven months - who cares? What's important is that you finished it and for someone like myself who just now stumbled upon such a lovely little piece of "delusional" as you call it, it's not even noticeable. WAFF abound, thank you.

H&H4EVA
Hermione Rae
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
this was sweet and funny - good work. very enjoyable and I like the way that they are both so clueless. cool.
 

AmericanMione
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
How many languages can you say "adorable" or "wonderful" in? Because that was some of the best fluff I've read in ages! Brightened my day!
 

AmericanMione
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/06/06
Yes, that was definitely needed! Simply wonderful! And another great last line and the dross-outs were as cute as Hermione's. *sigh* Lovely fluff!
 

AmericanMione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/06/06
Aww, that was sweet. The cross-outs were utterly adorable. And that last line was perfect. So, how's it getting to him then?
 

usha88
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
Well, that was quite cute. I really liked it. I hope that it was the letter that she wrote him when she dropped something into his pocket. Great job. I really liked the whoel thing. Very cute.
 

usha88
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/06/06
Well, that was quite funny. I'm glad that both Hermione and Harry wrote it and glad that whoever pursauded for you to make it more than a one shot, did. It's completely fantastic and quite hilarous. Great job.
 

usha88
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/06/06
Well, this sounds pretty interesting and gave a wonderful start as to what it is about. I can't wait to see what actually happens and how it unfolds. Hope this helps you out of your writer's block,
 

harryandhermione4eva18
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
Hello!!!

That was so good!!! I loved It!!!

Harry and Hermione Forever!!!

Lots of Love Maria
 

Hermione_Crookshanks
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
This is one of the best fics I've ever read...it was very well done and oh so cute...the perfect mixture of romance and comedy. Great job!
 

lzod
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
*G* Now that was typical them & so so sweet! I am a bit disappointed that they didn't find the other's letters cause that would have been great.

Lisa
 

acoustics1220
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/06/06
huh?

thats the end?

dang.

i liked it, but its alittle different in style from the previous 2 chapters. i like it though. still good. a bit serious near the end and somewhat anti climactic with hermione saying she needs to go to the library - again. and poor harry, why didn't he ask - will this include snogging? instead of studying.....but hey, whatever

and then the end...who was the she? madam pince? did SHE put hermione's note into his pocket or what? i'm alittle confused with that last paragraph/stanza/last 3 sentences......

still liked it though. i think harry's pov was the most hilarious.

and classic hermione thoughts too. absolutely awesome, especially her last sentence. something like - i'm never going to send this, or you're never going to see this or merlin, i'm never sending this.

and merlin's beard! what took you so long to finish this?

lol.

melissa
acoustics1220
Author Feedback: Well I just figured, bring it full-circle, y'know? Because they started out in the first bit with Hermione 'needing to do research in the library' and running off, and then end with the third, in which she honestly was on her way THERE when she was sidetracked, for lack of a better term, and saying the same thing after kissing him the second time would only cause him to wonder further whether she's making excuses again or not, and -

*shrug* It worked out in my head.

It DOES differ stylistically from the other two parts, mostly because it's been seven months since those were posted (due to much procrastination and schoolwork and simple FORGETFULNESS) and I've become rather fond of run-on sentences and various other forms of grammar murder, and also because...I dunno. The others were in first person, and I was attempting to write as each of them would since they were letters, while this is in third because I wanted to switch back and forth and get both POVs. Which makes for something of a difference, in itself.

As for the 'she' in the last paragraph...it was meant to refer to Hermione. And I thought that was clear, but looking back on it, I can see how it could be misunderstood with the way that the sentence was constructed. And Hermione would have had the note since Harry picked it up for her with her books (after the second time they were thrown all across the corridor), so she would've been the one to stick it in his pocket, and...wouldn't that have been a bit odd to have had Madame Pince caressing Harry's little finger?

Hunh. Although, ACTUALLY...

Thank you muchly for the review!
 

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