Lovely end chapter.
I liked how she turned to books and he turned to his broom to try to deal with the issue. I loved how the silence and awkwardness between them after they ran into each other - literally - suddenly turned into another kiss. Wonderful how this time Hermione's going to the library entails Harry going, too.

Oh, I loved this. It was fun reading Harry's perspective of their kiss. Good for Harry for kissing her even when she gave him such a lump on his head. So both Hermione and Harry are trying to write down what they feel and not managing to finish a letter. Very cute.

How cute, how fluffy! I love how her control suddenly broke - for no other reason than his laugh and his eyes. I love how Harry responded.

Dammit. Stupid thing won't send my review because it doesn't have enough words. Here's the original:
'And all together now: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.'

Dammit. Stupid thing won't send my review because it doesn't have enough words. Here's the original:
'And all together now: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.'

Um, NOOOOo! You have to write more! How is this even a conclusion? I am sorry for the juvenile-sounding review, but so it is. I really really like this fic, it's going in my favorites--how can this be the end? Bloody hell.

I really really liked this. I really did.

What'd she put into her pocket? that's what I really want to know.. lol.. Well, at least it's not a year.. I've made people wait 6 months before.. and then I feel really bad.. eh.. oh well, keep it up!!

hm...

me likee it was cute and very logical which just isn't harry lol

I like how he was confused but like trying to be logical and kid of mocking her along the way ..

one last part and than I must go eat!

oo0o

i like it a lot. and I think I will have to go on and find out what happens.

Thanks god I stumbled upon this.

Finally, I am now happy to dismiss the past seven months, you have outdone yourself. Again, I absolutely love this little story, and ironically just a few days ago I had been reading it over again. Thanks for this.

Well long delays between chapters is something I am quite familiar with ... Having been over a year since I have actually posted anything ... not abandoned mind you, but letting life get in the way of my passion of writing.

This story was very cute, although it seemed as though it was left a bit unfinished ... intentionally I suppose? Very little dialogue but given the title 'Unspoken' I can presume why ...

Keep up the writing and don't let real life get in your way (irons fingers for not taking her own advice)


As Always,
Muirnin - who always ships what is right not what is easy ... Damn the Canon full steam ahead for HMS Harmony, Oh and please pass the pumpkin pie - extra whipped cream

Oh this is very cute ... I like this it kind of gives new meaning to reading between the lines and actions of anvils and stuff ...

Can't wait to read the last chapter ...


As Always,
Muirnin - who always ships what is right not what is easy ... Damn the Canon full steam ahead for HMS Harmony, Oh and please pass the pumpkin pie - extra whipped cream

Oh very interesting ... can't wait to see where this goes


As Always,
Muirnin - who always ships what is right not what is easy ... Damn the Canon full steam ahead for HMS Harmony, Oh and please pass the pumpkin pie - extra whipped cream

Absolutely the most incredible, adorable, fantastic, bloody brilliant thing I've EVER read. Truly. So cute and so clever. So in character and so wonderfully fluffy. I can't wait to read the other things you've written!!! Keep writing and improving!

~ Vi Ke

That's perfect!!

I haven't read such a wonderful story in a long time... well actually I haven't been coming here lately so that may be the reason why. eheh^^''

Really wonderful story and Wow... My stomach has never done so many back flips! So I guess my stomach says your work is amazing and perfect and cute and I'd go on but then you'd think I'm a crazy wierdo wandring around...^^''' I'm such a dork!

Lovely fic!

Keep up !

Luv,
Joanne