wafballSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/12/05
Haha! thanks so much for this PWP fluff!! I love Hermione's Little Inner Voice! I can just imagine her debating with herself in that way (: |
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Heh heh heh...very cute and fluffy. Hermione arguing with herself, Harry getting assaulted by random younger witches, and mention of out-of-tune Weasleys. Very nice.  |
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I'm really loving your stories...theyre all really great...I'm off to read some more - this one was hilarious! |
Author Feedback: Hey there "L"!  Thank you! Glad you're enjoying my little stories! I certainly have a lotta fun writing them!
Cheers!
Janie |
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SpeedzSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/05
Haha, the inner voice was a joker! The best bits i say They are like that arnt they, very annoying, but always right..... ¬¬ |
Author Feedback: Those darn little inner voices ARE always right, aren't they?  Thanks so much for revewing - really glad you enjoyed it!
Janie |
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jajaja that was so funny that hole mind fight whne it happens its so awful and i had have a fight that long i usually shake my head and goo on but these fight turn 4 the best  i so loved it adn the end was extreamly funny |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much - makes me very happy to know you enjoyed my story and laughed and I appreciate you taking the time to review!
Cheers!
Janie |
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BarbieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/05
What a sweet and wonderfully hilarous story. i really loved the inner voice. and i am making a mental note of my own to read every single one of your stories. I have a feeling i am going to love them.
 Barbie |
Author Feedback: Hi Barbie!
Thank you very much for your lovely review and I'm looking forward to hearing what you think of my other stories (I hope you love 'em too!)
Cheers!
Janie |
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I did enjoy it. i got such a kick out of her mental conversations...probably because i've been through quite a few of them myself. :-)
when did Harry become so mature? perhaps when he realized his feelings for Hermione? he didn't let her go. it was so romantic!
and, I loved how Hermione was able to pull herself together and walk away from Harry when she saw him kissing that other girl. I'm impressed. I'm just glad he saw her and followed her because otherwise it would have taken them years to get together!
Thanks for the story! I had a lot of fun. |
Author Feedback: Hey! Thanks for the great review! Love to hear you got a kick outta those mental convos - I'm forever talking to myself! (I just wish my inner voice was as funny as Hermione's!) Harry I don't think, or planned, to sound TOO mature; I was sorta thinking that his "smart move" to NOT leave Hermione was because of his OWN inner voice (which coincidentailly sounded like Hermione...) I just let those two "guide"
me through the whole "story" - and they're hilarious and gorgeous and romantic, etc, etc!
Thanks for the thanks and I LOVE to hear you had fun - the whole point!
Cheers!
JanieB |
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BslehoferSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/11/05
Hi again....I'm officially addicted to your stories. At least today's was short and not an epic!
This was cute and fun and kept me from cleaning the basement. All around a great day!
I'd love to "talk" to you sometime if you want to email me my address is under my name. If not, no biggie |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/11/05
That was pretty hilarious! The two voices
in her head. I was cracking up so bad! 
What a great story! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/11/05
ha ha funny
i like the Inner Voice of Hermione....
her inner voice is evil...
that was cute and worthy to be nominated for the best one-shot on Portkey...
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Ooooo, I absoloutly loved this. Awesome, amazing job. Must put in favorites! =D |
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That was Sweet, and Hilarious! That little voice was great! |
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H_HrFanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/11/05
Hi Janie!
You are so right! I've been having a lot of trouble finding ANY one-shot, much less a fluffy one. Seems as though nearly everything is in-progress these days.
Your story is a lot of fun! Brilliantly written...I thoroughly enjoyed every word. There is so much you can do with those inner voices, I absolutely love them, and you've taken great advantage of the here.
I don't normally picture Dan and/or Emma when I'm reading or writing stories, but I could totally picture Emma's Hermione when you were talking about her 'pulling a face' and talking to herself. It was spot on.
Wonderful, fantastic, magnificent job. Thanks for sharing! It was most definitely needed!
Take care.
Terri
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Author Feedback:
Hi Terri!
Thank you so much for that gorgeous review! I was actually very pleased with this story - and it seemed to just flow very smoothly and quickly which made writing it that much more fun! It was almost like Harry and Hermione led me through it! !
By now you would've seen GoF you lucky, lucky thing!!! (Not opening here in Oz until the 1st of December :veryangry
Actually, it's quite a coincidence - one of the reviewers of "Caught Kissing" explained the "search/filter" facility which I've never used (I've always loved surfing the New/Updated). Then yesterday, after finishing the latest chapter of my WIP, I typed up a few notes on an idea that had come to me whilst working on Chapter 20. Strangely enough, those notes concerned Draco/Ginny which I totally do not ship because it's just so far "off the planet" (while Harry and Hermione is absolutely, completely, utterly, totally, defintely not - naturally! *Janie beams*). And yet, they just won't "leave me alone" and I'm damned if I'm not getting an idea for a D/G story *GAHHHH!!!!!* So saying, on impulse, I used the search/filter for D/G completed R/NC17 fics and blow me down if I didn't come across "After Hours" and of course, since YOU wrote it, it's brilliant! I was too tired to review then, but I will!
Oh dear! All that waffling! I just thought it was quite fun how I'd read a D/G you wrote (and I checked out the drawing - breathtaking!) and you said you don't normally do D/G - and here I have this damned idea that won't go away and I wouldn't normally contemplate writing D/G...
OK - shutting up now!
Thanks again - and you take care!
Janie xo |
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LilsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/11/05
Oops, sorry, with waz I meant way. (I'm writing on a different keyboard). Sorry about it.
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LilsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/11/05
I love the waz Hermione has conversations with herself (huh, now I feel less insane for doing the same )
Thanks for this lovely story! |
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