I think this is like the fourth time i've read this fanfic and i don't know why i didn't left a review before. Probably one of my favorite fluffy one-shots from portkey, absolutely funny and great, i specially adore hermione's inner voice (i would have never imagined it like that) and well harry was completely breath-taking with that kiss (i can picture dan radcliffe in my head kissing me like that, oh dear). Anyway, brilliant work!   |
Author Feedback: Well, I don't know you didn't leave a review before, either...  
OK, seriously - glad you finally did and glad it was such a positive one I must admit I loved writing this one, it was very easy and, well, me too!! That is, Harry=Dan Radcliffe  . Thanks so much for (finally!) taking the time to review  .
Cheers!
Janie  |
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Hehe i like your writing style, that is what i try to obtain by writing my own stories inhere  . Although you have me beat by several miles sofar  .
That was very sweet and right on the spot on how i would like for them to get together. The part about the inner voice was hilarious and perfectly matched for the story.
Good job!. |
Author Feedback: Hi there!
And thank you. And do you know, I take that as a SERIOUS compliment ("that is what i try to obtain by writing my own stories inhere"). Truly - it is unbelievably flattering and gratifying to have another author say such a thing! I'm also sorry I don't get much time to actually read here at Portkey as much as I wish I could; I don't get a chance to read even reviewers' stories (which is normally where I look first for reading material).
So thank you again - and as always, I appreciate everyone who does so taking the time to review - thank you!
And Happy, Happy New Year!
Cheers,
Janie |
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atiqahSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/08/07
I'm liking this Inner Voice And the title was really spot on . |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I really had a lot of fun writing this story - the "little inner voice" really was a hoot to write! Thank you for taking the time to review!
Cheers,
JanieB |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/01/07
aawwww.. i love it!!!! good job.. *sigh* although, idon't like harry being kissed by someone else... not a good picture in mind...but really i loved the story!!!!
I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!! |
Author Feedback: Hi there! Yeah well, that picture of Harry being kissed by someone else didn't sit very will with our favourite female Gryffindor, either, did it? And I agree - not a good picture! But it had a good ending! Glad you loved the story and thanks for taking the time to review,
Cheers,
JanieB |
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that was utterly cute!!!  that inner voice idea was brilliant!!! and very amusing! |
Author Feedback: Ah ha! Here you are again! Cool! Yet another great reviewi...just love 'em...
Also very happy to hear you liked this, too!
Cheers!
JanieB |
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H/Hr LoveSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/06
Haha hilarious and amazing. I haven't read a better story in a while. Seriously, it's been a while since I've read something this good. I'll have to read your other stories as well
If you have time, can you read and review my stories? You're an amazing writer and I'd love feedback from you. Thank you, and I hope to see your review on my site. Thanks for writing this fantastic story, and I look forward to more awesome stories from you.
KEEP ON WRITING
-- H/Hr Love |
Author Feedback: Hi there!
I'm sorry I've taken so long to reply to your review - for which I thank you, by the way! You would know how wonderful it is to receive positive feedback from readers!
I did go check out your story list - and both your stories are still in progress!!  I only read completed stories normally - mainly because I find that I lose the thread and the feel of a story and have to re-read the previous chapter each time - which takes more time - etc, etc! Pretty sad state of affairs, I know!  But I've learnt that I'm really better off waiting for a fic to be completed. I notice you update fairly regularly which is great so I'll keep an eye out and whichever of your fics is finished first, I will read!! (I often read my reviewers' fics if they're authors - I like to not only return the favour, but it's a nice way of finding new stories to read!)
So, I'll "see" you sometime in the future!
Thanks again for the great review!
Cheers!
JanieB |
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ValancySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/09/06
I skipped a few and jumped to this one! (I will go back for the others though!) Hope all is still well. I'd never heard of the cake and knife and plate thing. Where does that come from? Sounds fun!
This was a cute piece! I think we've all had arguments with our inner voice! |
Author Feedback: )Me again!!! (After you again! ) I'm always talking to myself - and isn't that one of the first ten signs of madness???!!  As for the cake and knife and plate thing - interestingly enough I've had a couple of readers ask about it but not many - and so I can't judge whether it's purely Aussie and reades are just accepting it as a tool of the story or whether they've come across versions of it...
It certainly wasn't around when I was a kid and I have a feeling that somewhere along the line teenagers came up with it because it was a good excuse to kiss someone... even at my dad's party just the day before yesterday someone in the crowd yelled out, "You'll have to kiss the closest girl!" (made me think of this story, ironicaly enough!!!) So while I can't give you an exact reason beind the tradition, it's a very useful one, don't you think?
Right, back to checking reviews!!
Ciao for now!
Janie xoxo |
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Hahahaha how I loved Hermione's Little Inner Voice! Very Hermione-ish (which I suppose makes sense, LOL).
Very cute! I've always loved these jealousy fics. Don't know why, but I just do. And this one was very lovely. |
Author Feedback: Hi there! "Saw" you over at "Reunion" Rather intrigued by the name "bluetomatopasta"...
Anyways, thanks for the review - I'm rather fond of this little one-shot myself - it was a lot of fun to write! I like that Hermione had no idea she'd be jealous until she was...if that makes any sense!
Thanks again and cheers!
JanieB |
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yesiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/06
69 is just such an uneven number isn't it , 70 reviews just seem to give it a lot more closure don't you think?
I don't think i've ever seen so many reviews for a one-shot in my life I feel weird reviewing so late but better late then never right? |
Author Feedback: 69 IS an uneven number and I much prefer even numbers! And do you know, your comment about "so many reviews for a one-shot" had me clicking over and checking my other one-shots and do you know, you're right?!! I think it's probably got a lot to do with the title of this fic - using 20/20 hindsight! But don't worry about WHEN you reviewed! I'm still writing and posting so I always notice new reviews popping up even on my older fics! And yep, better late than never!
Cheers!
JanieB |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/06
After reading the latest chapter of "Reuion" I decided to check out some of your other stories. I then recalled that I was familiar with a number of your stories. I have just reread this story and am again so thankful that you chose to share it with us. As I am completely devoid of any ability to write creatively I must depend on the generosity of others in order to get my H/Hr fix. This particular story is just so comfortably fluffy and is a wonderful diversion from the trials and stress of real life.
Once again, thanks for sharing. Your efforts are truly appreciated! |
Author Feedback: Hi there! While you may feel you're "devoid of any ability to write creatively" you can certainly write a very articulate review - thank YOU! Actually, writing is a wonderful diversion from the trials and stress of real life - I'm hooked!
Thanks so much for reviewing (again! )
Cheers,
JanieB |
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'Holy smouldering cauldron!'
Love that line lol XD
and Hermione's inner voice is so amusing. haha
Harry also looks positively boyish and cute when he refused to leave in the first bit.
Very good, fluff! Loves it. great job! |
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Heehee, adorable! Hermione's Little Inner Voice sounds a lot like how I would expect it too. Getting filled with Harry-centric thoughts was a given. And having it be bossy was just an added in character plus. Anyway, lovely piece of fluff. Good thing I'm going to the dentist in a few days. Those cavities are springing up fast! Loverly! |
Author Feedback: Ah yes! As adorable as that lovely sugary fluff is - nothing beats regular flossing and brushing!!! Mind you, it's all "sin-free" sugar...
Cheers!! And thanks for the review!
JanieB |
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This is a wonderful read! I laughed and smiled all the way through. Your dialogue skills are great--the conversations seemed very natural and quite humorous to boot.
I really enjoyed this!
CFFB |
Author Feedback: What can I say?? Well, I could say thank you (and I do) for the lovely review (I did) and do a little of that and hey, what the hell - I love that CFFB gave me a review! (I've always loved your "name" and I'm absolutely positive I've reviewed fics of yours in the dim, dark past )
So cheers and here's to a good laugh!
JanieB |
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man i love that little inner voice of Hermione's this was such a good story hope to read some more soon |
Author Feedback: Hi there - and thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I had a lot of fun with that little inner voice of Hermione's....hope to "hear" from you again if you get around to reading some more!
Cheers!
JanieB |
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VickyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/02/06
Best one I've read in a while!! Loved it!! Very creative, funny and perfectly romantic. I loved this part: "she could feel Harry's hands cupping her face, his thumbs gently brushing across her cheeks, wiping away those traitorous tears." AWWWW!!! So sweet!! Good job Janie! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! Gotta love Harry and Hermione,eh??!!!!
Thanks for the great review!!!
Cheers!
Janie oxoxo |
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