Zephyr892Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/11/05
Interesting Interesting....
I at first thought he was kissing a tree or a root instead of hermione
But just for future story help
Id recommend having a development in Werewolf control while in there form... i have a bunch of ideas to help you... but i dont wanna say them here
Feel free to email if you you want them
Zephyr892@hotmail.com
PS: VERY GOOD STORY and EXCELLENT style of writing, honestly... excellent |
Author Feedback: In all seriousness I have to say that is a good idea and it brings to mind HEY! WHAT? WHO'S THIS TYPING IN MY PLACE? GET OUT YOU!
*EPIC CLONE BATTLE ENSUES*
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I HAVE EMERGED VICTORIOUS!
*but who is the true Oatmeal? Find out next time on DRAGON BALL Z*
ROFLLOPOLIS! |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/11/05
Ok i am reviewing again because i gforgot to put you on my favorite authors, my bad, great story, keep up the great work and update again soon! |
Author Feedback: ZOMG YOU DID! |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/11/05
This is pretty interesting, i like it please continue! and keep up the awesome work... |
Author Feedback: Man I really wish you'd mention you put me on your author's list. |
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OOh, she marked him... rawrrrr!  I so love this story, it's wonderful.  |
Author Feedback: I would ROFL if I could, but I just waxed the floor. I have to wait. LOL for you. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/11/05
“,” said Harry.
“Oh,” said Hermione quietly, her eyes looking a bit sad, “That sounds very strange, yet very plausible in an official sort of way
haha, i like it! |
Author Feedback: It's like the best most perfect reason for why Harry would split up with Ginny. IT'S IRONCLAD! |
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JoraelSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/11/05
YAY! I reall don't rgeret approving our author's application! This story's real fun! And no to mention refreshing. |
Author Feedback: It's like sprite...or 7 up...or any other clear drink that consists of an artificially created lemon lime taste. |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/11/05
wow.. uh.. this is quite cheesy.. sorry.. lol.. okay.. uh.. well sorta Romeo and Juliet with Vampires and Werewolves, eh? So they attack the Werewolves the night of the full moon and had a get together with them as well.. I hope they closed all the windows at the castle, so the werewolves don't transform.. uh.. the story is alright. |
Author Feedback: POTATOES POTATOES POTATOES! |
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MellisaUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/11/05
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Author Feedback: HA HA HA HA ACHUNKZ indeed. |
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MellisaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/11/05
AWE! poor Harry! Life has to suck alot of mucho ass for him! |
Author Feedback: Thumbs up for his pain? Bravo! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/11/05
So when do they find out about each other? I must say this is a very interesting story, vey different... I like it. Well great chapter, update soon! |
Author Feedback: I wonder that too. And I'm the author! Man I'm so sneaky. SO SNEAKY. |
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emilyjaneSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/11/05
Hmmmm very interesting! i want to read more - please update soon - this is quite a new take on post voldemort harry  |
Author Feedback: Well I certainly couldn't have written pre voldemort Harry. Voldemort existed even before Harry was born. It'd be quite boring to just talk about Harry's nonexistence for who knows how many chapters. |
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Lucky that reunion wasn't on a full moon eh? Lol, great fic! I like it, and harry does seem like I would Imagine him to be if he did get bitten by a vampire! Well done and keep writing, I'm getting chapter alerts, so I'll know when you update!  |
Author Feedback: SHHHHHH...YOU'LL GIVE THE STORY AWAY. *TRIES TO HIDE THE REVIEW WITH WHITEOUT* |
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Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/11/05
Very entertaining! Alittle weird, and a bit confusing(to me anyways). But that will no doubt get less as the story progresses. So please keep up the exemplery work and update as soon as possible! |
Author Feedback: Confusing is my middle name. No seriously it is. I got ridiculed in school for it. Now the painful memories have resurfaced.....IN THE FORM OF FANFICTION! |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/11/05
lol.. why was she all in brown? that really struck me as odd.. so I'm guessing she was bitten by a werewolf around the same time Harry was bitten by Renior? or that's what I'm inferring.. hell you could say Harry seperating with Ginny after 6th year is the end of there relationship and cut out the whole questioning process.. lol.. this is intruiging... |
Author Feedback: Dunno. I just went with whatever came to mind. Bwa ha ha ha |
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