I've really enjoyed this so far. The premise reminds me of "Underworld" but I prefer Hermione as the werewolf hehe (: You've made it very very funny too, especially with Fred and George. Can't wait for you to update!

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chuckle yes yes yes goddamnit
hermiones a little to smutty though and harrys a bit too slow
but overall great chapter keep going

lol great chapter. that was a fun chapter to read. hope that you update soon

*Serious mode*
I know I don't quite use this mode so often. In fact never. But this is the longest chapter yet. So I'm just wondering what people thought of it. Was it too long? Or even longwinded? Heck how is my comedy?
/*serious mode*

ROCK ON!

hey this is a great story. dont give up as i am interested on how you plan to get Harry and Hermione back together

You write a very convincing story. While the chapters are short, the length fits the scenes well.
Please continue!

this is a really good story, i love the uniqueness of it! update soon please!

the wackiest hp fanfic i've ever read. i like it immensely despite numerous oddities...

fav author, fav story, blah blah blah(hope ya happy).

potatoes, potatoes, potatoes(WTF?).

p.s i have two 'beefs' to settle with you. Why? doesn't/didn't harry meet up with hermione during his six year absence?

i ask this because it made harry's excuses of not pashing hermione pretty weak unless the were in close contact beforehand.

also, could you make time compression more obvious please? maybe use these lines other authors use

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rather than jumping straight from one scene directly to another without any inclination.

thats all! keep writing! potatoes, potatoes, potatoes, potatoes (???)

you know i just finished reading the fifth chapter when i got the email for this... good as usually even if it was on the short side...

That was really good, i can't wait to see where this new part is going!!!

oh. But why can't Hermione go see him at the shop. She doesn't have to confide her activities to that castle?

I loved the story it was very orginal and hope for and update soon.

I should whole heartedly say I'm a terrible human being for even writing this part. Really.
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okay now here an story you need to fisinsh because it is great and i would love for you th add more chapter soon