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Oh.Wow. This was a wonderful story, full of emotion. I think this may be my fave piece of yours now. It left me with tears in my eyes and chills -literally. Wonderful story -really. ~Cat

Aww, what a sad story. I agree with Hermione about Harry: he was focusing way too much on himself. But offering someone to "take his place", so to speak? Not sure I would have only slapped and hexed him. This was a beautifully written story. I know a couple who had to go through a situation like this and now they're adopting, so it was an issue I'm really close to. Wonderful.

This is probably one of the saddest stories I have ever read! But I always knew that Harry and Hermione were wonderful! They should also have made a huge house for all the kids to live in until they could survive on their own two feet! This was a great way for them to have kids since they couldn't have them naturally!

That was such a terrific story, I had no idea what to expect, but it was great, thanks!

This is very well done, with excellent imagery. I have to admit I didn't really like the ending, and might have hoped for something a bit more climatic, but other than that I really really enjoyed it. Great job.

aww... I love it. Ha ha... YAY Ron's a HORSE.!!! woot. *save a horse ride a cowboy* that just poped into my head

luv it,
keep it up

-megz-

That was sad. It seems like adoption would be the obvious choice. No offense, but I think they would have thought of that sooner. I know it caused the conflict of the story, though. This was very good, maybe needs to be a bit longer or more expanded. anyways, good job!

Katie

Ooops, I forgot this story is complete already... But it'd awesome if you could write more!

This is great. I can't wait to read about the kid that they're adopting! Continue soon!!