Good fic! I especially love the last two lines, they express perfectly the idea of the plot. Keep writing like this! |
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BingblotSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/02/07
Being brave for him certainly wasn’t easy – loving him wasn’t easy.
But someone had to do it, and she wouldn’t have it be anyone but her.
You said it! Damn. That, in a nutshell, just sums up H/Hr and why I love it. Hermione will be there for Harry when it's hard to love him-- while Ginny won't and can't be. One of those insights into H/Hr that makes me wish I'd written it. (You do that a lot; if I were more given to jealousy, I'd be green right now... oh hell, I AM green right now...) Brilliant and sweet and poignant and perfect.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/06
you r writing more, right? cause if u dont, i'll die |
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Now I'm curious as to how Harry got soaked. Whether he said something to Ron, actually jumped in the shower inexplicably, or angered Peeves. In any case, I like the way it shows Hermione just trying to be strong, and only a friend. That keeps things from getting complicated, in most people's eyes. It's a really nice way of showing how Harry is worried as well. |
Author Feedback: Heh, I always had it in my head that he just inexplicably jumped in the shower - 'cause he ought to have been angsty like that after book five, if you ask me, and angsty people sometimes get odd ideas into their heads.
(And, personally, I think Ron would be more inclined to punch him than drench him. He's sort of quick-tempered and impulsive like that...getting water requires too much thought put into it, if you ask me.)
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I always appreciate hearing from you. ^^ |
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I like it, it was a sweet little one shot. I like that it wasn't too fluffy but it still gave the romance between the two. so now off to the next story Anything less |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/05
awwww.i love your one shots ficlets.there are so fluffy.nothing about character death or whatsoever.  what luck...some readers out there said there're starting to notice every second passing by.
kissing lessons for the begginer has grown quite popular.you only have like 6 chapters and people with longer stories have like 10 times less than your review.theres this dude who said."i guess i stop refreshing now".dun worry about me though.i keep myself busy but i do come here from time to time to read other fics and await your next update.its been months now.
ps:your not going through all those reviews are you?theres 500+ and almost half of them are flames anyway. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/11/05
aaaaaauugh i wish you would finish it! so sad! and yet ... so good. i like the ending because real life is like that. it doesn't always have a sweet kiss at the end.
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/11/05
That was a sweet fic. It's just like Hermione to provide that strong support for Harry whenever he falters. I can't figure out why he was showering in his clothes though. Oh, well-it still was a good story and I can hardly wait to read your impending updates. Thanks so much for sharing with us, it truly appreciated! |
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Little ESigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/11/05
Nice short little story. Good job of not letting details over-power the story line. |
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CharosSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/05
A MONTH! A MONTH! IT HAS BEEN FOREVER! ENOUGH WITH THE ONE SHOTS! Hurry please I'm dying for more chapters on those two. |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
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DJ32Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/05
Good Story I like the action hope to see more soon. Good luck with the rest of the story thank you. |
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Taking a shower in his clothes has got to be one of the strangest things that Harry's ever done! I guess he's really distracted, but Hermione has a good point, he should have changed afterwards! I mean, what would we do without Harry???? Funny and sweet! |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/05
That was a really nice (if short) read - but why was Harry showering in his clothes? Hmmm...perhaps he had Hermione too much on his mind (whether worried about her reaction to the prophecy or just thinking about her)...that'll do!
I'm getting excited about more of "Kissing Lessons" - just loving that story! If it takes a little longer, that's cool - just don't stop a-writin'!
Cheers,
JanieB |
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Anne USigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/05
That was very sweet and in-character for both of them. Though now I'm wondering why Harry had taken a shower in his clothes... |
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