wow that was simply wonderful. I really really enjoy your writing. Great fic!!

that was well.... i dunno how to put in to words, it was gloriusousm intense, filledw ith emotion and feeling. your charcterisation, though somewhat Oc, worked and belenede in well as they can't always act like children from where JK has written from!! well if you can't tell i loved this one shot!! or is there a sequal to this? cos it does defiantly have potential!! if that staemy scene was anything to go by!!

Wow! I´ve never read anything like this before!

"The two stood sizing each other up for a moment before Harry casually dipped his head in greeting and watched as Ron returned it with a jerk of his head."
awesome! That was the best part.

I think that´s the first fic of yours that I read. I´m going to check the others for sure!

Bittersweet fics are the ones that always pull me in. They tug my heartstrings and make me believe that at the end of every rainstorm there is a rainbow.

This was breathtaking - sexy yet sad, both depressing and uplifting at the same time. Great job with this.

YAY...! But I kinda feel for Ron. >< What am I saying? Ron + Hermione = Evil Ron. Ron + Luna = Yay!!!!! But still... Anyway, great story! I lurve them all.

wow.. I don't even have words to describe this.. so i guess amazing will have to do. ... such a 'hot' story. wow.. what a wonderful 'smut muse'
ramble on
dysfunctioalspirit

OH wow is there more to this or are you leaving a nice cliffie here to make us all wonder. Would be quite interested to see what would happen next. Quite different from your normal stories it quite refreshing actually.

I liked it, well written and quite a strong emotional turn about. I look forward to more.

AWWWWW !!! hot steamy and sweet what more can you ask for !!! love it !!!

Wonderful! Poor Hermione, to be stuck in the middle between her two best friends. Very good!

That was a really good story! i really liked it! Especially where you said that he'll wait til she left Ron. Good! i don't like him.

Take care and keep it up!!!
Sheryl

hey great story...would have been better if you had written a bit more.would defenitely not mind if you added more chapters to it.otherwise great.keep writing.best of luck.

i'm a major harry and hermione shipper and all but i think it is very wrong that those two are doing that to ron. it's completely unfair to ron! you can't just do that to your best friend. and i know it makes the story a bit more dramatic and all but i still think its very very wrong.

Nothing better than a well-written one-shot for breakfast! I wonder how long before Ron and Harry are no longer friends and Hermione's where she belongs - with Harry...
Great job!
JanieB

nice, but I kind of feel sorry for Ron, and its unlike Harry to betray him (are they not best friends in this fic? but still like alot