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(I) The Girl Sitting On The Grass

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/08
That is a really cool story. I love this version of Harry and Hermione getting back on track after HBP.
 

toxic element
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/04/08
brilliant! =D i'm glad you chose to start off after the 6th book. because like the many things you had harry and hermione point out about their characters during that time i also agreed with. the 6th book was one of the hardest books for me to read cause i couldnt agree at the direction of the characters roles not harrys or hermiones. your story seem to redeem the book for me though. i loved how you ended the chapter with harry's parents watching him. hmm their talk about love i think made it the perfect ending.
 

Faffy
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/11/07
i don't know why but reading your story makes me really really sad...i almost cries ..but anyways..great job...i love all of your stories..
 

rocio88
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/07
Wow! So beautiful. They are so much like the real ones. IT makes me so happy. I wish I hsd s love one like that. Its so beautiful that I can imagine it.

god bless you!
 

Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/07
Wow! So beautiful. They are so much like the real ones. IT makes me so happy. I wish I hsd s love one like that. Its so beautiful that I can imagine it.

god bless you!
 

Ashlie
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/07
nice one...good story,sweet plot...u could try writing something a bit more longer tho...
Author Feedback: Hey Ashlie! (Never saw the name written that original way...or it's a word game perhaps? lol)

I'm glad you liked the series! I mean, they are kind of long, if you put the four stories together, lol. But I know what you mean. The thing is that I tend to wander, so it's a challenge, definitely, to write something longer. I don't know if I have plotting skills... Anyway I have kind of something in sight...

thanks a bunch for reviewing, dear!
 

p_delusional
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
I've read the fourth installment of the series a few minutes ago, I didn't know it was a part of a big fic at first. Then I went back and started from the first one. This is ,indeed, a beautiful story. Now, since I've read two of your great work, I can easily say that you're a very talented writer, hon. *In love with your style*
Author Feedback: Yes, I was suspecting something along the lines, lol. Don't worry, I'm aware of this being a messy way of writing, but I'm not really confindent in my abilities with multichaptered stories, so this is what I came up with as an intermediate solution, hehe.

I'm glad you liked the others too! And thank you so much for being so nice and reviewing!
 

Isabela
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/07
God,I don´t even have words...Brilliant,wonderful and even more

Thanks for writing this
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading, Isabela! I just updated the fourth part, in case you have nothing better to do

hugs!
 

hermy415
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/01/07
wow, sweet story. I love it. The way you made Harry and Hermione communicate and turn back to the true HARRY and HERMIONE.. I wish, Ron didn't approach for a while because the moment was shattered. But I really liked it..

I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!!
 

CathyD
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
Really enjoyed reading this. I'm *so* glad that they talked and realized some things about themselves and their behavior's of the past year. Very touching moment when they were both crying. And I love your addition of James and Lily at the end. Lovely.

Now I'm on to the next story.

~Cat
Author Feedback: Hey Cathy!

I'm glad you like this. I was really really REALLY sad after reading HBP. It was madness! WHere were the ral characters, the ones I learned to love after five books? I wasn't even a shipper before! The irony of life, I realize that Hermione and Harry were right for each other, and not Ginny, just after JK ruined it all...

thanks so much for reviewing!

 

aleung
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/01/07
Nice. Harry and Hermione finally figure they were OOC in HBP, huh. But how can they be OOC in canon? Never mind, rhetorical question. Anyway, nice angsty story.
 

MyUsedRomance
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/01/07
Ah! Loved it! I really did. the end was magnificent. great job!
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/06
That was reallly great. I wanted to read the 2 stories before reading your most recent one. This one was really sweet. I can't wait to read the second and the third part. I really liked how you had Harry's parents in the end.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/06
brilliantly written really! i loved it! I've just read "It Could Happen" and thought i should come check the other ones out too. it made me shed tears like crazy. the ending w/ the lily and james point of view is nice, but a tiny bit cheesy at parts dough
 

Ravenclaw's heir
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/07/06
Aw this was a very sweet one shot and I liked it very much. You live in spain? Cool, do you know how to speak spanish? hehe I liked it and they weren't OOC (like in HBP ) nice story!
Author Feedback: I'm glad you like this one too! Yes, I live in Spain, And yes, I can speak spanish...because I happen to be spanish, actually, lol.

Oh, yes, THAT book... *off to swear in peace*
 

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