PG-13? 
What happened? Did religion find you or something? 
Just joking, Anne.
I must admit that I've missed reading up on what's happening around here... combine a messy RL with an AWOL muse (or actually a plot bunny that keeps pounding on my head), but I have been missing out on a lot these past few months.
Especially reading well-crafted, oh-so-enjoyably descriptive writing which is just so, so ... funny!
I can actually imagine some 13 year old going to his dad (or horror of horrors! his *mum*) asking, "What did Miss Anne mean about Harry's right hand doing something besides undoing his jeans? Or what is Miss Hermione supposed to do with him?"
Talk about crafting or word-smithing...
Nice one, anne.
And as usual, hope to read more from you... (time, and RL willing.  )
Kisses to you and Maya,
gil |
Author Feedback: Dear Gil,
It's so good to see you around PK again!!  Well, I did say there was innuendo, didn't I? And good grief, don't 13-year-old boys in the Phillippines do...that?  Seriously, I'm so happy you enjoyed this. I've kind of wibbled about it, and I had a difficult time writing it, so I'm glad people seem to think it turned out okay. I don't know if you visit the PK discussion boards these days, but I've been very active in the HBP discussions and am now somewhat less depressed than I was at the end of July...You'll just need to read some of the threads, especially those started by brown and house_elf_44, to know why. *hugs you back* BTW Maya drew the most adorable H/Hr picture using MS Paint; I wish she was old enough to have an account on the PK Galleries.
Hugs,
Anne |
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Wow in one chapter you already have them snogging but you did it soo smoothly. Im so bad I couldnt help thinking how bad his breath must smell fromt eh eggs. lo0l
SOrry keep going im enjoying it! |
Author Feedback: Well actually, this is a one-shot. No more chapters. So I kind of had to get them snogging - that was the whole point!  And Hermione doesn't care that he tastes like eggs - like Harry, she was just looking for a chance to make a move. Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reviewing. |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/11/05
They really are just darling. Of course, Harry was surely being a prat. I mean really why not just jump in with both feet. That is how I know I would have been in Gryffindor. Anyways, great plot bunny. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. The prompt necessitated that Harry not jump in with both feet. Thanks again. |
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e999Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
wwweeeeeee i this story! perfect! well written, great quotes, fit in with HBP perfectly. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much. The prompt required that the story take HBP into account and I'm glad I was able to work in so much canon  |
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww thats so cute!!! i just love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
~Hermione Jane Potter~ |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed that story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
*happy sigh* Thanks, Anne. That was perfect.
I really liked the dialogue and interaction between Ron and Harry in this fic.
Nicely done!
*hugs*
CF4B |
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OHH THATS WAS ahhh so cute and i kind of get it that you did these and it really like it cause it seam so natural 4 them to be like that it was shot but good, keep it up your getting better but the fic call snitch is still my fav 4 all times .... |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed this story. SNITCH (you mean the short version?) was actually more fun to write  |
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puck_ncSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
Very well done! I especially like how you wrote Ron in this one, finally grown up, mature, and a very good friend to his two best mates. |
Author Feedback: Thanks much! Ron needed to be grown up here to be able to reflect on why his relationship with Hermione didn't work, and so that he could be happy to help Hermione and Harry get together -- as a really good friend should be |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
It may take Harry awhile to get up his courage, but once he does he goes all out. This was really a sweet fic. Thanks for sharing! |
Author Feedback: Thanks much. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. |
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*sigh* I like the name change, it fits so well.
I love the interaction of the Trio here, with the opening scene where things are just fine and Ron and Harry's "talk".
Harry's bathroom break was hilarious and I loved the banter with him and Ron afterwards.
Very sweet ending, loved the nicely resolving tension. |
Author Feedback: YAAY! Harry and Hermione had sexual tension! I'm glad that came across. And Ron and Harry's chats were the easiest thing to write in this fic. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it again. |
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lylac14Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
aww very cute!! nice little ficto read before istart writinga paper-- ahh! haha aweomse job,love helpful rob!
xoxo.jenna |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. Hope you had fun (?) writing your paper |
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Awww, ain't it cute!
Even the bit with the Erumpents, whatever the heck they are! Great! |
Author Feedback: Erumpents are magical creatures similar to elephants. They're in Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them Thanks for reviewing. |
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